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Dope piece, both dropped nice.
Achilles had nice structure which made the flow nice, it was smoothe and easy to read. I saw you throw in a few multis that were decent. Some better vocab would have worked nicely, but still a good drop none the less.
ADR Really liked your verse, you also had nice structure with smoothe lines. You threw in a lot of inner rhyming and multis that i liked. Could have been done on an audio nicely, samething with the vocab as Achilles but just about everyone needs to elevate in vocab.
Keep dropping.
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Let Me Give You Some Advice Home Boy...When You Do Audio You Don't Need Vocab..Alot Of These Emcee's On Here Be Talking About Vocab..Vocabulary Means Nothing..Just Another Thing Some Dumb Fag Made Up To Critic The Verses On..When You Spit..Do You Use Big Vocabulary? No So That Was Non Sense.
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Stfu, this isnt audio dipshit, this is OM where vocabulary is a factor fuckface. Just about anybody can drop a good OM if vocab isnt a factor, if you rhyme words like cat and hat your saying that is still good? Because big words arent good anyway?And many artists do have nice vocab in there audio.