this is more like how u read a prayer than a OM so u need a new structure
i cant even read this so work on it alot
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this is more like how u read a prayer than a OM so u need a new structure
i cant even read this so work on it alot
vocab sucked too basic no multies need i say more
well we all have our oppinions...
you should read my elevate ft Vortex.
youll understand me more.
i dont care if i cant write.
as long as you read it and get a point.
all good
precaite the comments
keep em commin.
nice flow some parts got me off
but otherwise it was good
preciate it pimp ghostflow.
keep em commin.
uhm1 .. it got a bit over-rhymed on one word in my honest opinion
still i like the way you flowed from one nigga 2 da next line to line and got the story told clearly.. the similies could maybe of been lined up a bit better for more impact tho
drops pretty ill for a cypher still tho worked well together
stay on the up
check my new OM out-
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=238276
pz
Uppin' for more feed
the rhyme stlye was cool and the concept i liiked 9back and forth)
work on ya vocab and peep Im With You
preciate the comments.
we was just havin some fun.
im working on a colab wit one of my homies right now.
hopefully well be done soon.
Sweet Lyrics! but I put comas after each end off my lines.
lol thanks... i guess...Quote:
Originally Posted by tobeabletopo
but what does that have to do with anything? lol
its line, for line, for line.
thanks for the imput tho.
keep em commin...