seriously. if you dont read this your a piece of shit!
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seriously. if you dont read this your a piece of shit!
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people dont RTF god damn. Upping
ok this was very good. after talking to mr. lyric about it and grasping the meaning it became even better. i thought you two both did an excellent job on the rhyming, meter, and structure. however, what really got me giddy about this piece was the way you two flipped common phrases that seem splendid and compare them to things that many often think of not being so good. i am tired and i cannot word anything properly now so imma just qoute 1.
"So used to it now, bad days seem practically normal
Bruises looked like diamonds, rags looked almost formal"
ma boi lyric be dope yo. end of convo. im feeling this fo reals y'all
^ Thanks I'm hitting a link in your sig right now. Upped!
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so people never RTF.. how gay is that
Open Mic is like that ....
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I think that L.I. really killed it with his rhyme scheme, multis and a pretty good vocabulary but Laurete was far from bad. I just couldn't read (I read keystyles out loud) Laurete's with as nice of a flow as L.I.'s. Good collaboration on the whole.
hot piece ya'll...vocab was off the charts...structure was great...imagery and feelin were real good...just a straight up good OM...keep that shit up ya'll...peace.
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