Elevate?.... featuring DATBOIP

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October 4th, 2005, 01:06 PM
Mic D

Quote:

Originally Posted by Vortex

fuck you and your shitty feed thats what this joint is about

who r you ya fucking idiot.. this drop is definitely aimed at pricks like you

^^^Again I ask.............WHY DO YOU POST ON HERE.......if do not want real feedback on your shit........post your verses on a solid webpage with out the capabilities of a fucking bulletin board..........These places are called FEEDBACK FORUMS for a fuckin reason kid.......DO YOU SEE HOW IGNORANT YOU LOOK GETTIN PISSED OFF THAT SOMEONE TELLS YOU YOUR SHIT IS NOT GREAT. If everybody just told eachother they were great no matter what......what would be the point of dropping on here. You would know what the replies are gonna be....Feedback is supposed to be HONEST OPINIONS...not blowing smoke up eachothers asses
October 4th, 2005, 01:30 PM
The Vortex

ok im reporting your freeposting to a mod nowif you cant find a sensible comment

thing is you probaly diddnt even read my verse

if you did you wouldnt be taslking your head off in this way

your prolly a regular on site using an alias to let off your jealousy

im dope full stop

fuck off
October 4th, 2005, 01:41 PM
The Vortex

you obviusly diddnt read these lines if you got shit to say

hahahahahahahah

wish u cud b dope eh

Quote:

Originally Posted by Vortex

DTBOIP1
Vortex2

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so before you go judging me and telling me that i suck
go over my shit twice, "elevate" your comments, cuz i dont give a fuck!

im open-minded to feed folks, but don’t respect feeble quotes
& neither does the rest of the talent, your jealous n it’s apparent
You never been nice, so all your elevation advice is transparent
Talking that dyslexic slang, saying “u shood impove evaryfang”
The fuck kid; cop the Collins-dictionary b4 u bring that bullshit

u c me im simply the perfect enemy, so nope were not friends
So go raise your fucking game..- b4 u freepost in my dope OM’;s

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oh yeah heas my links

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=237425
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=236364
October 4th, 2005, 04:06 PM
Mic D

if you "dont give a fuck".....why u gettin all pissy and whiney bitch
October 4th, 2005, 04:21 PM
The Vortex

Quote:

Originally Posted by Vortex

you obviusly diddnt read these lines if you got shit to say

hahahahahahahah

wish u cud b dope eh

oh yeah heas my links

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=237425
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=236364

if you got anything to offer lyric-wise sonny.. take it to the frontline and we will battle str8 up sr8 votes no prob

otherwise shut up coz i dont get your whole purpose of existing at this present moment in time

thankyou very much
October 4th, 2005, 04:31 PM
Pharoah.

nice flwo..... this was pretty nice..... vocab was okay

could be alitle more multies
October 4th, 2005, 04:32 PM
Pharoah.

hit up my drop: a night to remember. and if its sooooo dope..... NOMINATE IT! for hof
October 5th, 2005, 01:32 AM
DATBOIP

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mic_Dareall

^^^Again I ask.............WHY DO YOU POST ON HERE.......if do not want real feedback on your shit........post your verses on a solid webpage with out the capabilities of a fucking bulletin board..........These places are called FEEDBACK FORUMS for a fuckin reason kid.......DO YOU SEE HOW IGNORANT YOU LOOK GETTIN PISSED OFF THAT SOMEONE TELLS YOU YOUR SHIT IS NOT GREAT. If everybody just told eachother they were great no matter what......what would be the point of dropping on here. You would know what the replies are gonna be....Feedback is supposed to be HONEST OPINIONS...not blowing smoke up eachothers asses

well first off, why do imature pricks join forums?
oh thats right.
gay relief. every forum has it's handfull of flamers.
good job buddy.
this post aint goin nowhere.
just like yo fag ass flames.
thanks fo comment gay boi.
I really do appreciate it.
from the bottem of my ding-a-ling.

also, preciate tha REAL props from everyone else above, yall tha shit. fa sho.
leave links if yall got OM's you wish for Vortex and myself to comment back.
keep em commin...
October 5th, 2005, 01:34 AM
EvOLuTioN

Quote:

Originally Posted by DATBOIP

EvOLuTioN,
preciate it.
you know i got a vocab of a suba diver...
bubble bubble bubbler...
the last one was a fart... LOL
yea ima do better vocab next time.
this was just to get a point across.

Lol ure a real crackhead dat...lmao
October 5th, 2005, 01:36 AM
EvOLuTioN

Quote:

^^^Again I ask.............WHY DO YOU POST ON HERE.......if do not want real feedback on your shit........post your verses on a solid webpage with out the capabilities of a fucking bulletin board..........These places are called FEEDBACK FORUMS for a fuckin reason kid.......DO YOU SEE HOW IGNORANT YOU LOOK GETTIN PISSED OFF THAT SOMEONE TELLS YOU YOUR SHIT IS NOT GREAT. If everybody just told eachother they were great no matter what......what would be the point of dropping on here. You would know what the replies are gonna be....Feedback is supposed to be HONEST OPINIONS...not blowing smoke up eachothers asses

Mic dareal, as far as i kno...no one likes u, keep it up and keep messin wit my boy dat...and ure gonna have real problems
October 5th, 2005, 01:38 AM
Cody Nash

Dat- you had a odd verse...your lines were played out and need elevation! heh, but your flow and structure were pretty good...your concept was pretty good...I wrote a piece like this but it was very disliked because of the topic so I see this as a really bad topic...I don't even associate with that piece anymore...so yeah...Good stuff though...potential flows all over in this verse...

Vortex- Where'd you come from!?! Nice shit though dude...your flow was hella nice and you don't need my advice at all...your structure was a bit meh cause your lines didn't really match up...but you had some dope concepts here...you took a dumbass topic and made it dope...Keep it up and I look forward to seeing more...Peace
October 5th, 2005, 01:40 AM
DATBOIP

me, odd?
man i dunt giva-fuk!
lol
preciate it tho.

also a thanks on behalf of Vortex.
yea, hes really good. lol

and shit, im starting out yo, ill get better.
pffft...'elevate'... you made a funny..

preciate comments.
keep em commin.
October 5th, 2005, 01:49 AM
EvOLuTioN

Ayo nash.. whats rong wit the topic? i didn't think its retarded cuz i think its annoying wen people tell me to elevate meanwhile i beat them...they got a nice subject here.
October 5th, 2005, 02:04 AM
DATBOIP

Quote:

Originally Posted by EvOLuTioN

Ayo nash.. whats rong wit the topic? i didn't think its retarded cuz i think its annoying wen people tell me to elevate meanwhile i beat them...they got a nice subject here.

my point exactly.
why put someone down?
even if they sound completely horribly.
let them be a horrible rapper.
atleast its a dream.
better than nothing.
well, if they come out with like "yo yo im da best, ima kill the rest"
and repeats the same line like 12 times, and its 16 bars... LOL
yea, u give em a hint then...
but i appreciate all comments.
some i turn the other cheek, and far-.. er... ignore them... :laugh:
October 5th, 2005, 09:59 AM
The Vortex

word to the bumps

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