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yea u do need to elevate. j/p but it seemed like u were jus throwin out thoughts and that u aint got a flo and time to put a piece together . the rhyme was basic . but u had a good topic and it ws well understood . put more time and vocab into ur work
yea son, that was a hot piece, i can see where you comin from
"Most of yall like to kill people's rap dream
tho you never really think of how much it might mean
to the folks that put so much effort, to come up with their entire scene"
those lines stood out most for me
nice drop and keep em comin
nice shit nigga, but u need to eleveate, naw im jus playin. keep postin
yea... u missed my whole idea...Quote:
yea u do need to elevate. j/p but it seemed like u were jus throwin out thoughts and that u aint got a flo and time to put a piece together . the rhyme was basic . but u had a good topic and it ws well understood . put more time and vocab into ur work
but thanks for the comment.
lol
anybody else?
uppin tha 4th, and probably my final time...
then let it rest in my sig with pride baby!
also, check out Elevate Ft. Vortex
shits hot!
preciate all tha love i got.
yall is tha shit.
fa sho.
Like I said in your other Drop:
"Why do yall post on here.........to get real feedback?....or just for everyone to tell you how great you are when your not???.......I got an Idea for ya.....gather all your lil buddies that reply to this saying how great it is and go start a fucking google group called Please dickryde me and have all the fun you want without anyone ever telling you how bad you really are"
nice shitt mann upin on this shit
some of this rap is good but the rest is wank
yea... like i said in the other one as well...Quote:
Originally Posted by Mic_Dareall
hand full of flamers, and your their flaming leader.
good luck with your gayness.
and...
preciate it...Quote:
Originally Posted by mcbadboy
you said "wank" lol