Life through the Vortex

thanks bro

good looking out

nice structure nice flow i like it
it was designed good

ups on this

thamks brah.. u cudda left a lil mo feed tho...smph

The concept was different so i gotta give props for that originality barely exists in OM. Your vocab was used properly a lot of the big words but the bars were not cryptic so i enjoyed reading the piece. Your imagery was the most impressive thing in the piece it was very dark very descriptive a lot of questions asked in the piece i really like these type of verses. The hook was ok but if your gonna do this as audi o think you should re write cause i think it would sound off on audio. Structure was fine i aint too bothered about the structure, your flow was a bit inconsistent compared to other pieces ive read from you but you know how to do multies and internals so just mix a few more in next time. Keep writing and posting.

safe bro

and up

and uppers