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Aight first off...
Syckness, you can't throw a good punch when ur talkin about urself...it just doesn't happen....Self Glory getz u no where man....... example..
ive heard ya stuff before, but da syckness is back,
so every punch u pull will be blocked, u mess wit da syckness,illness what u got,
in something other than abattle rap that would b aight...but not in a battle rap...
My vote goes to Pharoa overall harder punches....example
Gotta elevate your voice, so your verse can be over mine
I mean you got so few ups, your downs working overtime
so at least he did throw a punch.....instead of talkin bout hiself.... :P....
Vote Pharoah
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yo upin people nice battle pharoah
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thanx for the vote virus
still uppin
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My vote goes to Pharoah because he had a nicer verse, and with the metaphors, I especially liked the "Downs working overtime" line. It had structure, and more wordplay than Da Syckness's verse did. I didn't like DS's verse because it had some self-glory and praise in there, plus his punches were kind of wack. So my vote goes to:
Pharoah.
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yo listen, ima break dis nigga like a twig, make him go SNAP,
ive heard ya stuff before, but da syckness is back,
no.
so every punch u pull will be blocked, u mess wit da syckness,illness what u got,
where does this line fit into?
u can get shot wit my lyrical bullets, im shootin rockets,
you couldnt rap if i was feeding rhymes through ya pockets,
ok.
rip ya eyes out der sockets,
no.
your rapin blind, u couldnt spit straight if i drew ya da line,
dis da bottom line, your raps are shitty,
gay.
its a pity that u stepped up to me, cause u get dropped quick,
i ll drop ya ta ya knees , and show ya sickness,
no.
merkin you to the end of ya history, egyptains are dead, but how u died aint no mystery,
gay
lyrically dead, u roll over in ya grave but nothin was said,
where the hell is your punches at?
lookin for a come back, but none came,
u come hard but brought no game,
now let this be the end of ya name, da end of ya fame.[/QUOTE]
hell no.
your structure was fucked, punches really weak, you need to step up your vocab and complexity, just elevate.
vs.
fuck it im known to crush... tight here this is the wackest kid
watch me bring doom to your lyrics just like ya fuckin' sig
ok, not hard but ok.
Gotta elevate your voice, so your verse can be over mine
I mean you got so few ups, your downs working overtime
lol.
I fathered you last time, what makes you think you got some chance, kid?
Even Butch Cassidy don't want me to do the "Son Dance", Kid
wasn't feelin this.
Your verse has no motive, not even Sherlock Holmes can find it
It would need to be buttfucked by logic... to have some truth behind it
decent.
this kid is fucking done i'll leave him to goddamn grieve
why you dickriding born...... yo claim yoa record is the same as his league
punch was there but re-wording would help.
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crazy an daring, make sure u hold onto ur text an dome,
cuz battling syckness is like adopt. parents, u cant hold ur own!
meh. alright
overall pharoah you came more consistant with punches, your struture was easy to read, you had better everything, work on harder punches and come consistant with them more often.
