Lyrical Holocaust (Final OM)

mad long, but i liked it.. i liked the metaphors and punches and flow, everything, lol keep that shit up.

Logging off now uppin this.

yeah dawg the metaphors was ill, keep it going

yo that shit was ill u white to? im guessin u is overall its ill but y call it lyrical holocuast

The multies you used in this were very good. Every single line was a multi, its ill how you managed that. The punches you used in this were very good too, original as ever. The same thing can be said for the metaphors. This piece was full of self glory, and did what you intended it to.... made us all realize how good you are. LOL dope drop.

Dam...pretty deeps shit. I loved the multis and metaphors...all stuck right into place and made a lot of sense...Most Om's I read usually make no sense to me...because they just throw things that rhyme in there...YOU actually thought about what you wrote..I like that...I only critisize some forced wordplay...Like rhyming Twat and Back...kind of a odd perspective but you had dope lines to back it up anyways..so It didn't really matter in this case...20 good verses against 1 bad one...I think that's dope...Nice shit here keep it flowin' sick...Hopefully you will get a computer at this new friend of yours house and you can keep droppin' dopeness...Keep it up...Git at me :)
Peace..........

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Good song, great structure, stylized shit, Keep it flowin'

im sorry but that jamie lee curtis line killed it...big ups man that was a phat drop everything about it was good so i didnt have time to critique your flow as much.....to be dead honest that was the hardest shit i've read in awhile!

Uppin.

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Reply to my thread you bitches.

Uppin this how about some more feed ive replied to loads of other Om's and havent had the feed return. Most of threads i replied too were shit so you should appreciate my feed.Uppin.

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nice man 7/10