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demo- ur lines were structured ok but they were weak .no good punches, u jus didnt bring heat
melt- u came wit some nice hooks but ur structure and flow need elevation
melt=overall better verse
dahm....wut type of battle was thiz???? nobody spit no true fire but hey, i guess i be'z like that sumtimez.....V=Melt for betta verse even tho i think u shouldve put tha beatz on anyway, it ain't gud to sleep on niggaz but thiz dude was definitly worth being slept on....haha, wow....V=melt