Printable View
a decent battle but i gotta give it hands down to
melt brain
he had a better flow
better structure
stood constit (didnt get off topic to much)
had a few punch lines
mc FireSt0rm you gotta come harder and work on your structure its hard to read your shit like that and you need to stay focused on your oppent throw punch lines more often and stay on topic, yet u had a decent flow
good battle
vote: melt brain
ye s.i.c but he a fly weight innit im used 2 writin lyk tht cuz i never spit on tis web syt b4 but thanks 4 the feed back
sfe nigga
i think melt got this just. it was close. he had more structure. i think mc had better punches tho none of them were really hard. it was also difficult to read. melt had better impact on his first line. close battle. no hate mc
vote for bruza v krayawn
bruza v babyshante
kk................................................
yo melt vote on my other battle dogg plz peace .,.
any1 vote on ma other battle............................
yo uppin, this shit needs to close....................................
up................................................ ......
up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!vote !!!
not a bad battle it was pretty decent the only thing really that got me was the structure no offense mc fire but u have to elevat on ur structure i didnt like it u have the comma thing but it looked like one big long sentence othere thatn that it was good
v/melt
RIGHT.......
Firestorm you had no structure to ya verse man.....try not to run all of ya shyt together...read some other battles and figure out some structure....
Melt brain you won this one no contest....you had overall better punches than this kid...
example
the only time you drop ill is when ya fall down from ya herpes
melt ya brain like a seven eleven at the equator and ur a slurpee
vs.
B][I]melt u seem in pain ,course u in pain when im burning my ryhmes in2 your brain with a adjustable flame ,cuz my ryhmes are sum you wont forget cuz i wont let u 4get lil children always tryin 2 pet u this the childrens let me direct u in2 the adult area oh fuk this bitch got hysteria. i'll eject this mutha fucka bk in2 siberia cuz im the 1 hu puts the melt in yor name, i melt
hold up.....WHAT???
Vote for melt brain for better structure and harder punches....
hit this up with a honest vote fellas
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=235549
the only time you drop ill is when ya fall down from ya herpes
melt ya brain like a seven eleven at the equator and ur a slurpee
(nice spit melt)i liked dat line
mc- u had nothin i cant even catch a flow on yo shit u need to break up ya lines
V=melt...need i really explain??? firestorm ur shit was trash, u need to take ur whole shit bak to formula, melt had a way betta flow, punchez, and wordplay....my V goez to him