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iz pretty nice..coz it has suspense to it and rolls like a thriller.. the poetic rhyme scheme came accross well in the end tho i thought i wasnt feeling it at first but it works as a complete format...
i like the delivery of words as well thats pretty sharp and effective
imagey was good and had me picturing it for real
prettydope i'd like to have seen more
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=234988
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Links have been returned, up
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this was some hard shit..
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I just knew this was going to b hot just from looking at the name of it!!!!! Nice drop man liked the whole concept of it and da vocab was tight man...hot drop dogg keep it up
