Its, ok. Ill leave good feed later.
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Its, ok. Ill leave good feed later.
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Decent Drop
Good structure which gave it a nice flow...
Vocab was ok could've been upped slightly...
Worded nicely given a good message...
Very creative..I see u have a good imagination...
The message was delivered nice and clear....
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is this robbo????
yo i like ya style it sounds alot like soem shit ive dropped on OM with the use of complicated words and metaphores
but i thought the flow was great but u could make ya structure a lil more original
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dis was preety godd it was a good flow almost like poetry well das wut rap stands for rythm and poetry is good man keep it up
It was Ill Bro, Keep It Up...
That shit was sick. Every 2 bars i was like DAMN. It kept me wantin to read more. The flow was smoothe as fuck and you had some nice word choice. keep it up.
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ill flow and all rymes was decent to keep droppin and elevatin
pretty weak... okay with multis in spots but had a weak rhyme scheme... the idea isnt bad but its got too much of something...
I the imagery isnt great, pretty in the middle of the road... Honestly, there just wasnt anything that stuck out in you verse.
Work on the fallowing...
Rhyme scheme, ideas and content, and imagry...
Just read a lot of elite topical verses and listen to some tracks and you will learn a lot