Glad Someone Actually Picked Up On The Message.
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Glad Someone Actually Picked Up On The Message.
this was a pretty decent jjoint... its just a bit scruffy in appearance tho and parts cudda been worded better...still was an interesting read and had its good points in the
rhymes and flow.. but parts got a bit choppy within those longer lines at times
a little imagery was ok...
decent still
This was pretty good. I like the introduction that you gave on this piece. I can't really picture anyone saying the chorus out loud though. For the most part, the material and composition of this piece was done pretty nicely. Both Makeveli Trained and Atticus held it down brilliantly.