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yo ya'll check out the om i just did called shit to think about its hot
yo that was the gayest thing iv erver read in my life you got to be homo you stupid ass bitch
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you shut the fuck up bitch post in here again I'll get you bannedQuote:
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that shit was real and deep. i don't really like life story songs unless they are unbelievably good and that's what this is. props to the three of you.
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Yo Rizz That shit was deep as fuck along with ur mans Nash, and Va...Yo Va had my ass thinkin...damn that shit was deep as fuck...that shit was on point...Mad Vocals...and shit...turn that into a song and yall straight for a minute..."The truff is always the best flow u can ever Drop"...point blank and there aint nunntin to act skeptikal about...MAD props my niggs
Word dope piece homie...Just One Problem with it..
Yall didnt tell me if I wanted to be in this!!..
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this was a real sentimental piece...very well written........tha first verse had a hell of alot of multis made it have good flow....juz shorten dem bars an den u be set......second verse
very well writen as well.....str8 up........i felt this verse.....wat would really make it betta if u put mo multis......makes da flow betta....but u didnt really need it flow was good..."unlike overheated cars..I couldn't get repairments"
dat was a nice meta......liked it
3rd verse
dawg u niggaz damn u got emotional on this....which is gr8!!...emotion is a big part in a topical....da reader needz 2 capture da image u paintin da way u visualize it u feel me......well this verse was str8 up nice liked da multiz....juz make a part 2 niggaz
in all this shit was good hommey
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