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I like this peice but th first couple lines were a lil dead tho then as I read it got better and better like ur structurebut wordplay wazn't that great to make it better u should of used more vocab like the topic tho hommie
Keep droppin
Overall 7.2/10
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decent at best man...your flow was kinda weird on this but overall a decent drop...keep em coming!
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rizzo u can do better dis did not catch my attention at all
yea it was kinda b-4 i grasp'd the concept of OM..............but peep my collab's i catch on quick :yes:
i read all ur other stufff and it was good keep it up tho just like ppl tell me ur gettin there
IT WAS NICE. KEEP IT UP AND WAZZUP bABY SMILEZ?
yea...........thanks 4 the feedback...................but let this be the last comment dun wanna clog my thread
hey mista grim go 2 a different forum all follow u
i liked this shit homeboy, good work.. keep it up fam.
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Originally Posted by chadillac
decent nbuttin special
keep elavitn pz
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