yea son this piece was rippin. Wordplay, flow, style, was all good 9/10
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yea son this piece was rippin. Wordplay, flow, style, was all good 9/10
come on ive replied to mad threads this week and i aint had half the feed back, more feed motherfuckers.
Pretty Good Man alot Of Potential Lots Of enthusiam you'll be there one day just keep on rhyming man..
I liked the first verse more, but the second was solid. The flow changed a little bit, which would be good for an audio. The multis were placed well. The flow would be nice on audio. I don't understand why it was orginally closed either.
Uppin.
Ive had 134 people view this piece but ive only had about 11 replies the rest have been me uppin the piece. My shit gets slept on big time.
it was nice.
the rhyming you had going on with the multies and internals and all that shit was off the hook, but to be honest, this piece didnt really keep my attention. maybe its because i just got out of 4 hours of class, but who knows. still the piece was well written, just not exactly my steeze. keep the pieces on drop though.
Thanks for the feed im writing some new shit tonight so i'll post it up 2moro or the day after until then might as well keep uppin this.
i thougth this had quite alot of good qualities, you did use your multis well, but i thought you used them in a way that knocked the flow, some places didnt seem to flow off the tongue so easy as they could have, you said mine was lacking in the flow, but it came off the tongue better than this did, granted it didnt have an many multis, but the wording fit better in my eyes... asides from that tight drop, good read
keep hitting mine and ill do the same.... see ya
good verse dude i really felt that flow, ok structure too good job