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Wow.....Just wow............
Dis piece was very good.Very sad and i barely have no words to say.The vocab. was good.Not too many big words and not too many little.Alot of imagery.Very emotional.First two lines already said sad.Towards the end it got more sad,which i liked and found very nice.This whole piece was just incredible.Like what rezen said i dont know why you aint in legends too.Hope you git better feedback to dis piece.
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ay K u hurd from Bro lately? that lil cunt aint been on msn for a while
um who are you ^?
Damn this was real deep, the concept was original which is rare in OM.
Obviously your vocab is good so it makes it easier for you to come up with some great detailed imagery. Sometimes when people have a large vocabulary they seem to use it in the wrong way they just use big words for the sake of it, you dont so i was really feeling this piece.
You do use the big words but you manage to still get the emotion out through the words instead it being just a bunch of big words mixed together to look impressive. Obviously there was a message in the piece which i always like. The opening four bars drags you into the piece and the last four bars really finish the piece off well. The only thing i could say to work on is the flow obviously you know what flow is so maybe try and mix in some multies but fuck it this piece was still fucking dope.
Can you return the feed on my new piece id appreciate it, peace.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=232302
i produced that ''like pow'' track u n bro did. used to be miidnite on here. u hurd from him?Quote:
Originally Posted by K
ah word....um yeah hes about man - K
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