Kareless & Cannabarz: Like me.

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from the ends. proping this ish.....haha

this is sum heavy poetical spitsz right here...good piece ,, delivered on point and dealing with current issues of paranoia.. pretty cool.. i prefer to see flow variation in pieces instead of just straitlaced and consistant.. but this piece works all the same for me.. first verse was nice on the vocab.. 2nd verse cudda been strengthened a lil on that tip


dope drop still

keep at it 1

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I wanna hear this on the radio. I imagine what it's gotta be like when I drive and have a bomb go off in front, behind, to the side. I'm not like that often but death lurks the few times I read internet stories about bombs. I'd be more interested to read someone's view that does see that every day. Thank God for this country tho, eh gentlemen?Nice artwork

good post.. not really complex rhymes.. but very easy to read.. feeling came across very well.. flowed nice.. great vocab.. and how the first verse ended was great. nice post all in all.

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nice everything in there was pretty much awesome great work

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first verse was pretty dope, the flow was flawless, rhyme scheme was ILL and it had some humor.. lol @ some of those lines, the lines were well worded and you did a nice job of grabbing the readers attention. 2nd verse wasnt as good when it came to the flow and rhyme scheme, but was still a good verse. overall ya both held ya own but i feel the first verse did outshine the other, good collab though guys., I feel the same on the bus sometimes lol.

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damn, i liked the concept of this one, you's could have got me on this, lol... n/m
kareless, well both, i liked the way your verses panned out, a consistant story telling, although the one difference to thew way you write your verses to mine is, i always carry the ryhme on so its an endless seam, if you know what i mean, it takes away the poetic sound of it, but thats just my preference, so yea overall dope read, liked it alot, specially being from the UK myself, i could really relate to it

good job...

pz

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-forgot that Kareless was Brix..

Wassup?

Anyway, I really liked this piece..you both connected well in expressing this "like me" concept staying on topic and maintaining fluid flow throughout the piece. both portrayed their thoughts and kept a strong writer's voice throughout their stanza

another solid topical read you guys

keeptatit

Word. Thanks alot nique.

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