Loss Of A Loved One.

^ Yeah, thanks, man. I'll leave feed for your OM's in a little.

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This OM's dead. Whatever.

i been following you for long time now and i just love your shit for real i want my shit just like yours original and laid back nice work

Lol. Thanks bro.

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Ok. Now this OM be dead...like whoa!

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This was a good verse, concept was original you got good emotion out in the piece if you was gonna do this as an audio it would have to be longer maybe you could do a backstory to the piece then it would be pretty dope.
The flow was decent but it wasnt consistent but this being a story rap its better to concentrate on keeping the vocab and imagery strong.
You did that in this piece so i thought it was good.

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Thanks yo. Up.