pretty nice. i like your style and good use of vocab,keep it up.
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pretty nice. i like your style and good use of vocab,keep it up.
thanx for the feed uppin
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nice spit man I like tha vocab...nice flow...everything was on point..really..nice shit overall...1
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nice drop man...
but one question..why aint i on that list????? :(
I feel what the concept's about, and it seemed deep with nice rhymescheme but sometimes was kind of stretched. I like the metaphors and how you explained shit... It's still felt simplistic and maybe a poetic touch to it would of made it better like saying more deeper phrases. I think this piece, overall, was pretty decent.
Keep it up and keep on elevating.
ill tell em you said this yah realy deep piece