flavin vs untold

Up this... Quit sleeping people!

Just leaving feedback....

Think'n you somethin? Thats sayin you actually dope
He drops the soap. His verse is 'Bob' without the 'Hope'

vs.

Today ur gonna see demise, but that should be no surprise
U’ve lost so many times, u can prolly see a loss come before it arrives
Realize your punches make as much sense as a fat anorexic
I’ve seen better verses written by a blind dyslexic
Next to nothing this kid stands when it comes to shit
U come looking 4 a win, ud have a better chance of finding balls in a clit

i see flavin winning this by 2 punches, flow was good by both but flav could work on structure and wordplay and untold should work on vocab and consistant punches.
I liked both verses but flav came harder.

I cant vote yet but ill leave feed..

Flavin-meh your whole verse was pretty weak mayne, elevate and your rec looks way doper than your actual skills. flow and structure were koo. multies none. personals. none

untold- your whoole overall verse was pretty good. your punches personals, flow,structure were good tho. no multies really. overall pretty good verse

v-untold

Up again! #3.

4... Quit fucking sleeping, you tired MUTHA FUCKA'S! LMAO

You paper thin and I'm cuttin, 'push in' his neck's button
I'm a demolish this trick, and 'beat' this 'dick' to nuttin
Think'n you somethin? Thats sayin you actually dope
He drops the soap. His verse is 'Bob' without the 'Hope'
Bust ya guts, dragin ya nuts and leave ya body trashed
Even if this nigga dropped first, in life he'd still be last
Pass this ass... His elevation would be to rap backwards
With herbs like this, RB should stand for 'Rap Bastards'
I'll leave this 'pussy stuck' like a fuck'd bitch with cramps
...This battles like playin the lottery with no legs.............
.........................You don't 'stand' a chance.................


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^^^yeah i did the same thing^^^

This kids a story untold, and that’s the way it’ll stay
Run back home son its not time for the fake bitches to play
Today ur gonna see demise, but that should be no surprise
U’ve lost so many times, u can prolly see a loss come before it arrives
Realize your punches make as much sense as a fat anorexic
I’ve seen better verses written by a blind dyslexic
Next to nothing this kid stands when it comes to shit
U come looking 4 a win, ud have a better chance of finding balls in a clit
Shit u actually think u dope, u wouldn’t be if u were marijuana
Id say ur rap careers dying, but u already a gona (its already dead

v/untold
4 structure punches
an nice flow
flavin elevate dawg

yo don hate elevate

can u vote on this battle

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...711post3028711

Up.

I liked untold's verse better because he came with punches and more flow than flavin.

v/ untold

vote for untold he had a beder punches n shit n sturcture n flow ns hit

Up #5... Vote!

hey yo ill battle anyone
but i dno how to challenge people so challenge me

hey yo wanna battle me i dno how to challenge peeps so challenge me

battle goes deff. to untold... his verse was sick and whored flavin...
structure flow wordplay creativity and punches go to untold...
v/ untold