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This piece was a very nice drop. It covered a good concept, which was very nice, and flowed well. The idea behind it stood out the most, so you did a good job on coming up with a topic and then writing on it. Imagery was above par too. Excellent use of vocab, although in places it maybe seemed a little forced, but that could just be me being picky. Overall I enjoyed the read a lot. Keep up the good work.
This is really hot my dude would sound good on audio holla at me if you do that
yo pretty tite good vocabs and a lot of nice rhymes sum was lil basic but still worked as nessassary,,, clever storyline and delivery.. tite flow dope drop
keep up
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Truly one of the more deeper pieces on here. Had great timing when putting in your multis, as well as good vocab usage, and amazing ways of using imagery. And you were able to keep the structure and flow at a good pace. All in all, a real hot one.
yea man this was deep I like it..nice use of emotions...good vocab..good flow like the topic was a good read...nice drop man...
Yea, thats what kept me readin... your topic was on point tha whole time and imagery was really nice... i'd like to see more to this piece tho, as in reading more..coz i was hooked lol, keep droppinQuote:
Very dope drop, i liked the vocabulary you used on this, the first 4 lines sucked me in.