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gone- what the fuck, alot of ur shits didn't even rhyme homie. and u had some played concepts. work on harder punches cuz u had some s/g in that verse. ur verse was weak over all cuz u had nothin that inpressed me at all. make on harder punches, be more creative, and uses better vocabs then that. peaches, ur verse was better, atless u was dissin ur opponent, nice flow as well. structure was iight 2 and punches iight 2.
v/peaches but you still need to come with harder punches and personal but you got this one
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gone- what the fuck, alot of ur shits didn't even rhyme homie. and u had some played concepts. work on harder punches cuz u had some s/g in that verse. ur verse was weak over all cuz u had nothin that inpressed me at all. make on harder punches, be more creative, and uses better vocabs then that. peaches, ur verse was better, atless u was dissin ur opponent, nice flow as well. structure was iight 2 and punches iight 2.
v/p
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thank ya'll... i appreciate it... i do need to work on my punches doe some more but thanx
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im rich with my words like they was rhyming funded
and i'll fuck you in a verse worse than Spicy_one did
not bad
its some shit that we live in the same state but im the capitol
call me mickey-D's the pimp cause i stay big-mackin yall
:no2:
james and the giant peach aint that sorta shit im into
you claim you aint a slut when the whole film's cast was in you
:no2: animated characters...nah son
battlin me's pushin the envelope like shovin mailmen
ima hope you dont drop your lines to save yourself the failed-ten
not bad
cuz no one wants to read ya raps like gay incest secrets
and ima eat this MC like say, for instance, *peaches*
DECENT GOOD...CLOSER
Overall:4.5
VS.
*i tried but here's my verse*
So here I am battling this bitch ass mothafucka name gone
have this nigga in the church choir, at the top of his lungs singin a song
not bad
can’t rap at all 4real but good at givin lap dances
win this battle the first time, I neva give second chances
ok...
jus like spicy make him give me that good head after this battle done
thought he was a soldier, but this nigga walk around wit a toy gun
:yes: good there u go...
bitch just now learnin how to read and write, dumb as fuck
so sad how on the streetz he constantly get raped hard in the butt
:laugh: good
beat you so quickly faster then the verses from twista
can’t neva get any bitchez so u stay home and fuck ya sista
:laugh:
niggah pimps up hoes down, im the pimp you my hoe
make u dress in some heels, and on the corner there you go
:laugh:
NICE CLOSER
Overall: 7.0
This was an easy battle for "Peaches" i think she merk'd gone...lol she came hard as a mug...her punches and wordplay was devastating to his whole genre of lyrics...her flow was constant after the 4th Line and got Harder and Harder...thats wassup...GONE needs to elevate more and gain wordplay and punch lessons cuz he just wasnt cuttin it against Peaches...thas wassup though...good battle...well for Peaches...
v/Peaches
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peach-nice verse with personals all the way throu, u used nice rhymes and multis.
i liked it cuz u balanced evrythin out. u do need to work on harder punches thou and better vocab as well as maybe some structure, not as much thou
gone-nice verse too homie, no real good flow thou,
u had some punches but they werent too hard. work on elevatin with flow and punches mixin together. then come harder next time and pick up a W
vote/peach
