Datrushurts(AM) vs Gifted Signs(SLM)-crew battle

you say Soul Taking Mafia is nothing but a herb crew
so how does it feel to get your forum taking right from under you
ok, opener looks 2 force
so I guess now you going to say STM is a herb this and they D/R that
but losing this battle and not going no where wit rap thats where you at
nah,
you ain't shit...thats why you stuck here with nothing in your pocket
any ? about this being a punch well I guess I gotta rip his head outta da socket
watch the self-glory, but was ok, ok
y'all can rate this simplisty or by complexity...it doesn't matter to me
yo but if I see him on the streets I'll show him exactly how to be a G
no punch, just talkin,
I'll write this for now but i'll say it to his face later...FUCK YOU BITCH
and if got anything to say there's a whole lot of desert to dig you a trench
weak, closer,

not a good verse gifted. i mean what happen. u uslly come harder then this. u had no good punches that i liked, u gotta be more direct and be more creative. also use harder vocabs to make ur verse better. u could have done better then this foreal.


vs.


Your a just big talkin' bitch, but you ain't nothing but shit
This dumb fag has to read signs to figure out what gifted is
ko concept, but didn't rhyme
You ain't nothing but piss n' ya puches are missin' ya herb
Cuz I NEVER seen a fag whose dope who has to bold his words
iight, almost didn't rhyme either
Your a hideous terd n' damn dawg ya define wackness
Bitch the only six pack you got is held together with plastic
six pack? gay, and didn't rhyme
But the truth is I wrote that last bar awhile ago whore
See I couldn't find an opponent wack enough to post it for
wtf, weak man
Clown I'm starin at ya corpse, ya crew's wack we agree
But STM's in a league of it's own.........40,000 under the sea
ok opener.

men your verse was weak as well. no good punches in there. they were so and so, well they iight nothing big. what i didn't like was that most ur shit didn't rhyme, and this is a rappin battle ur lines gotta rhyme. because of that u lost to me. u had some gay stuff 2. not wordin in ur verse. work on them stuff and ull be good.

v/gifted

vote dqued for uncritting vote
-Tim

Uppin #3.................. all links left returned

V/ Gifted signs


Beacuse he had a good verse consiting of harder punches and better word play and the way he had them connect to hit his opponent, decent structure an real easy 2 read good job very hard decision this was a good battle between the both of u the other guy was ko 2 ight punches an wordplay good but Gifted took this in the catogory of the punches but good job 2 both good battle over rall

[b]I think Gifteds verse was better than Dth verse for these reasons

Gifted had punches personals and humor to is verse..his sturcutre wasnt the best but i liked the flow to it...i also like the fact that since it was a crew battle he rept out his crew...7/10

Dth's verse was simple..wurd play was sight but his first lines were garbage..and the line about the six pack..lol well he shoulda left it lookin like he jus thought of it cuz tellin me he wrote that makes him look like a herb...structure was good and punches were aight...6/10

v//Gifted

I think Gifteds verse was better than Dth verse for these reasons

Gifted had punches personals and humor to is verse..his sturcutre wasnt the best but i liked the flow to it...i also like the fact that since it was a crew battle he rept out his crew...7/10

Dth's verse was simple..wurd play was sight but his first lines were garbage..and the line about the six pack..lol well he shoulda left it lookin like he jus thought of it cuz tellin me he wrote that makes him look like a herb...structure was good and punches were aight...6/10

v//Gifted

you say Soul Taking Mafia is nothing but a herb crew
so how does it feel to get your forum taking right from under you
ok, opener looks 2 force
so I guess now you going to say STM is a herb this and they D/R that
but losing this battle and not going no where wit rap thats where you at
nah,
you ain't shit...thats why you stuck here with nothing in your pocket
any ? about this being a punch well I guess I gotta rip his head outta da socket
watch the self-glory, but was ok, ok
y'all can rate this simplisty or by complexity...it doesn't matter to me
yo but if I see him on the streets I'll show him exactly how to be a G
no punch, just talkin,
I'll write this for now but i'll say it to his face later...FUCK YOU BITCH
and if got anything to say there's a whole lot of desert to dig you a trench
weak, closer,

not a good verse gifted. i mean what happen. u uslly come harder then this. u had no good punches that i liked, u gotta be more direct and be more creative. also use harder vocabs to make ur verse better. u could have done better then this foreal.


vs.


Your a just big talkin' bitch, but you ain't nothing but shit
This dumb fag has to read signs to figure out what gifted is
ko concept, but didn't rhyme
You ain't nothing but piss n' ya puches are missin' ya herb
Cuz I NEVER seen a fag whose dope who has to bold his words
iight, almost didn't rhyme either
Your a hideous terd n' damn dawg ya define wackness
Bitch the only six pack you got is held together with plastic
six pack? gay, and didn't rhyme
But the truth is I wrote that last bar awhile ago whore
See I couldn't find an opponent wack enough to post it for
wtf, weak man
Clown I'm starin at ya corpse, ya crew's wack we agree
But STM's in a league of it's own.........40,000 under the sea
ok opener.

men your verse was weak as well. no good punches in there. they were so and so, well they iight nothing big. what i didn't like was that most ur shit didn't rhyme, and this is a rappin battle ur lines gotta rhyme. because of that u lost to me. u had some gay stuff 2. not wordin in ur verse. work on them stuff and ull be good.

v/gifted DTH I seen way better from you,you let me down I really taugth you would kill him but it came out other wise.

copy and pasted vote dqued
-Tim

Good battle
Breakdown
punches -Gifted[direct punches]
flow-D[good flow]
personals-Tie[Both did nice ones]
structure-D[Cause gifted streched]
wordplay-Gifted[nice wordplay]
Pretty even but I give it to Gifted Signs

my vote goes to Datrushurts.He came harder with his punches and personals in his verse that really amazed me.Gifted came with decent punches and personals but they didn't hit as hard as I thought they would.The other thing I liked from trus is his structure and his wordplay it was really good to win this battle.Gifted had a good structure but his wordplay was ok I think you could have done better with your word play.But overall this was a good battle from both of yall and it was hard for me to vote on this one but my vote goes to Datrushurts

vote:Datrushurts

gs-your verse was good there were some punches in there, but they didn't really hit and you had no good personals

dth-your verse was good and there were good punches in there you didn't come as hard as usual but it was enogh to win

V/DTH for better punches

yo BlackSilence you can't vote im on your crew LK

y and im in yo crew tunnel blood but u lost dis man u got ad d/r's

Bitch the only six pack you got is held together with plastic
But the truth is I wrote that last bar awhile ago whore
See I couldn't find an opponent wack enough to post it for
Clown I'm starin at ya corpse, ya crew's wack we agree
But STM's in a league of it's own.........40,000 under the sea

v/s

you say Soul Taking Mafia is nothing but a herb crew
so how does it feel to get your forum taking right from under you


DTH you started off a lil slow but you ended very nicely build up to that 40000 leagues under the sea punch, wish I would have thought of it its simple but yet very very creative but anyway u actually had punches and Signs just had statements and filler

v/DTH