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CREATIVITY....this was nasty when it comes to creativity...I really liked dis drop man...the cockiness was nice...the first 4 lines were my favorite cuz i'm a real opener freak...the flow was great, the vocab. everything about this piece screams quality drop.
look out for my 3 part OM...Comin sooner than you think
I think soon, how sooner is sooner than soon, son?
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damn soon.
Bad name, bad sig, bad avy, bad attempt at comedy.
Uppp
this is really goood, complexity is crack
the flow is pretty good a lil strreeeetched but good shiut
9/10
ayo this drop was fa real....sum nice shit all around... straight up 10/10
DAMN this piece was straight fire...from the wordplay to the vocab to the flow, had some excellent imagery in there too, and the closer blew me away..theres alotta bars in there i liked but heres one that really stood out to me:
"Broken souls crash through my shoulders like kamikaze soldiers.
And there cold loads decompose, and I carry them like boulders"
the very only part i wasn't feelin' too well was the supercalifragi..etc part, it mightve jus been because you split the word in half but i'm willin to bet that if you made this an audio, it would get rid of that flaw..anyways overall this piece was DOPE, keep writing yo..
very poetic and some beautiful imagry within those lines, nice use of wording and an acceptable length, flow was near perfect, i wasn't really feeling the first two lines but you totally impressed me like I knew you would, this was a lovely read jofus hope to see much more like this...
return the favour homie
Def Poets.
I willlllll do Thanks to everyone else for feedback.
Upp
nice drop...
on some parts u kinda messed up, need jus a lil bit more work on yo structure
it seemed lik u were writin a poem..
but good job on this, i was feelin it
lol. Thank you!
Upppppp