damn i cant vote yet need a 100 posts but thx 4 the vote treason
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damn i cant vote yet need a 100 posts but thx 4 the vote treason
I got to give this to treason for a more creative verse..I liked his wordplay and I was into his verse....Kartoon u had a straight verse too but i dont think it was as creative as treasons was...overall i got to give it to treason. v/treason
Yall hit up the battle in my sig and make a honest vote...thanks
i think trezon took this one because he had a better verse and he had good creativity.....i liked da way he flows in wit da topic name......its hot
u had some good word play.....i liked ur verse better.....kartoon...u did good too but not good enuff ta get ma vote and win it.....i liked ur verse too but it came a little weaker...but u still did good but sorry
v//trezon
treazon-you had a good structure.you had a nice flow.i liked your wordplay.and i liked the imagry.it was a very good piece.
kartoon-your structure wa ok.you had a shaky flow.yiu had trouble wit adding wordplay.as it went on to the end you steered off topic.
vote-this one goes to treazon because he had good flow,wordplay,structure etc..kartoon you have much to learn onmakin your topicals good cuz at times you steered off topic.vote treazon
treazon lost iight buh bye otha boy got moflow n punchlines
I dont even know if this was a battle or a topical match..........but anyway i feel treazon came much better and harder than Kartoon just because of the better strucuturing and he stayed on topic so thats real good and i feel that Treazon won this one so
V/Treazon
pimpdawg...try reading the verse before you vote idiot..this is topical..it wasnt based on punches...and you got put a hate vote since i didnt vote for you...lets cry a little now...*weeps*...aiight back to reality.~1~
last up...........................................
wow...nice shit treason...ur flow was maddddd sick....n hit the topic on the head....very well spit homie...i liked readin that shit for real.......excellent verse.
yo kartoon, ur shit was iight too homie...for real it wasnt bad...but u need some work on it...but i felt ur shit too...but kinda bored me a lil bit...but it was iighty
v/treason - better overal verse