To The Father I Never Knew(MUST READ)

*tear*...lol...Dis shit was tight....Your structure was perfect.....Da flow was too,it really was ez to read and go by.....Da imagery in dis was dope....Almost everything in here was imanigible.....Vocab. and wordplay was creative and well used.....Rhymes were real good as well......Nice collab.,makes me think i should do one too.....Dope piece guys....wanna see more..........

Check out my om:
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=220903

thanks guys, i'll hit yours up in return too. ^

keep it real.

Nice piece. The refrain was very fluid. You took the topic in a way I didn't at first think. I liked the description in Glory's verse about when Jesus is no longer in a person's life, that stood out to me. Camrok's closing couplet was well worded, and ended the verse nicely. The verses had a similar structure, but since the rhyme placement was different, there was a different feel. Emotion was strong, felt in both parts.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=219649

thanks. & up.

I'll try to get to some links...

thanks again. i'll hit some links now, uppin.

uppin.

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Yo This Piece Was Dope I Like The Way You Two Set It Out You Came With Consistent Flow And On Point Vocab, Not A Lot Of People Can Set A Scene With Words But You Two Managed To Do It Which Is Great Because It Helps See The Imagery In Your Piece. The Concept For This Piece Was Deep And I Think It's The First One I've Actaully Read That Was Worth Reading.
You Two Make A Good Duo, Keep At It.

I'd Appreciate It If You Replied To My Verse About Recent And Not So Recent Terrorist Attacks In My Country (United Kingdom)

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=221511

Thanks

PaRa

thanks, man. up this shitt..

yeah, this was good, the collabo was magnificent, the two styles worked well together.

the flow was great, not off at all, the vocab was good fro this piece, it fit it well, and the story told was well told, the topic has been done, but this was still a really good piece

damn, i havent seen camrok inna while either

Peace

^ up..

yea, perhaps a reccomendation to rb legends? haha.

im feelin dis..Kinda nice..coo wordplays..some lines was very deep
the structure was coo..everything looked good...keep it up..1

feeds lackin.. lets go!.

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