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damn i didnt know you were this good, your better at topicals than battling Im guessing? but then again I havent really seen you battle much, cept for that one fight night battle we had on bboyz. but yea man feeling this, the wording was good throughout, the flow was pretty good, and it was just a pretty good piece really, not much else to say., nice little read though, I usually dont read ish this late at night, 4 am but I wound up reaidn this, and yea, it had emotions and shit, you did a good job kid..
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it was good i like the scheme and stlye :laugh:
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damn... shits real.
dope ass drop
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peep my drop and give some advice..
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your feedback sucks donkey nuts.. i suggest you edit in more or u'll end up on the watch foo.
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DAMN this got REAALLY DEEP n DOPE!your emotion got me to start sayin it out loud to visualize it all better...your flow n rhyme scheme was dope..your multis were excellent, vocab wass consistent, structure was good...one of the best pieces ive seen on RB...definitely HoF imo...your imagery was very DOPE..but your emotion was what really got to me...keep writing man, i'll be lookin out for you more..ONE!
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