yo rizzo u need to elevate 2 simple good verse but work on ur structure rhymes and wordplay
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yo rizzo u need to elevate 2 simple good verse but work on ur structure rhymes and wordplay
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Rizzo u right, not everything needs some amazing punches or amazing wordplay...wordplay is just basics as well...
i like your scheme because even on the surface it seems basic but u kept that scheme all through out and thats pretty tough to do, which makes it a Unique kinda piece, nice though i was liking it,
i dig how u got ya ideas across in an easy to feel simple rhyme scheme,
u dont allways need to make it confusing to be nessearily good...
(i cant spell im sorry)
good shit keep uppin keep elevating,
and you should check out this piece i did on here story line rhyme its long as hell but its so worth the read its a Story keystyle i slapped to gether in this forum,.,...
its called INSANTIY by OnUrb....
u'll enjoy it trust me, when u get a chance return the favor peep it for me,...well not only for feed back for me, but for yaself u will def not regret readin it
wunn peace
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nice drop
better then the other one
nice concept good word play o.k structure
i think u two people cant rap
it was ok but it could b betta it was really a basic drop it need alot of work
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