The Living Ghost

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I think u coulda made this longer, it had a slow flow which personally I dont like but Im guessing its good for u, it was a good piece but u still need more practice with endings, read a lot of topicals and u will see wut I mean, also u should check teh new mag in SS when it gets posted cuz it has some tips on writing in it a lil bit and read a lot of OM's, especially legendary ones man, u will get better with time though.. overall 8/10 cuz it could be longer, I know it could.

also can ya please leave feed on Mentally Disabled in my sig cuz thats my new one..thanks