From his view.

hey, i think they've pretty muched summed up what i would say. its great, and i felt it. i dont know how to say anything that hasnt been said already, but keep at it..9/10

That was the best OM i've read n flow was on point! Thw whole story was dope n to make sumthin original off a topic like that was pure skill... great piece n keep writing, hoping to read more from ya! 10/10

cant really say much more than has already been said..very dope piece...flow was pin point...vocab..wordplay..complexity..rhymescheme.. .structure...topic..consistency...very dope....keep droppin tha hottness.~1~

..word up.

I less than Three you Daz.

Holy shit, dope ass drop from you.
Now take that shit audio okay?
Anyway the Imagery was like whoa amazing
and All the metas didnt throw the flow which
was a very good thing. One of the best drops
I've seen around the site. The best ive seen
in a long while. Definatly legends status.
Wow, the emotion was crazy ill still the imagery
has me amazed. great drop and very original.

They laughed and jabbed, pointed and stabbed and bragged
Then strapped his back, with a cross that made the chariots axel crack
It was sadly mad, the whips with points that scratched his back
That he grabbed the mass…es by staying strong I was actually glad

dopeness defined^ Imagery dope.

I’ve debated the choice, turned and weighted my course
My patience devoid, and used, they’re hatred is coarse
And without reasons or facts they just hate him because
He says he’s the ‘Son of God’. They’re bent on takin’ his blood

Multis in the first two lines almost completly rhyme sick as hell.

10/10 Pure dopeness.

wow...

wow

just, wow




legends. period.



quit arguing about this in or out... its obvious is legend worthy

why didnt this get one either?

Pain is nothing if you know how to deal with it. Jesus Did what he had to do. I'm not going against your poem here dev, I'm just saying that we can have the same disciplines as the son of god.

I don't know about the walking on water though and healing ability but I believe I am powerful enough with words so if I was endowed with physical powers I would consider it to be nice. But just kinda unnessesary.

Jesus was a god also because he could walk on water (levitate) and heal plus he had the power of communication. Yes, son of god.

You did good Dev.