Vy nice drop, it was kinda average in the begining buthad good imagery and the last few line really tore it up through every concept of the piece nice drop man.
Go check my OM
Crossing The Gap.
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Vy nice drop, it was kinda average in the begining buthad good imagery and the last few line really tore it up through every concept of the piece nice drop man.
Go check my OM
Crossing The Gap.
Dopeo.! Nice flow. Good story. Nice Concept. Blah Blah. Alot of imagery was used in this peice which I liked alot with some emotion here and there. All that other good ish.
Vote - Vylint for HOF....OM HOF atleast.
Two links or this gets closed.
Damn this was dope me and you are going to have to collab with something like this... That line was butter... Keep at it...Quote:
I've got a big face, demonic, with a misplaced onyx
I'll Make god a promise to overthrow him and spitshake on it
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=213490
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=211975
sorry forgot to post em. i had em the whole time.
Yea.
Although I've definately seen you write some doper shit (like that stuff on that one site that closed down- can't remember the name), this was definately cool. It was a bit short, but at the same time, you had enough time to develop good imagery and emotion in your writing. Yea, it was twisted, but you wrote it very uniquely, and as such it came out dope for most, decent for you.
Word.