Damn quit sleepin on ish, Wake tha fuck up
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Damn quit sleepin on ish, Wake tha fuck up
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sad story but ........it kep me interested thts all that matters.......i mean its excellent work by clitoria cummings.....i could feel tha tension...the other verse coulda been worked on but overall the shit was hot no vocab really just story line......but i enjoyed it i cant really say that for some of these other people who post there shyt......congrats keep up tha good work and if ya ever se flyest nigga eva around here gimme some honest opinions.........ight one fa now
^^^ thanks
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I see yall still sleepin, U wanna sleep go get in da bed, don't sleep on my music.
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iight nice drop yo this collab could have had sum more vocab from both of u. had real depth and emotion to both of ur verses. both had real great imagery. its all happenin in my mind. great job on that. ms. clitoria cummings, u could have sum better structure. sort of confusing to read. but great verse. both had great flow. overall on both verses i give it a 9/10. keep it up and keep on droppin collabs and pieces =)
thanx for the feed man apreciate it ya heard thanks
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O.K A Gud Song Here...
Nice Emotion, original enuff concept gud flow and very creative...
I'd say improve ur vocab (on both verses) and wordplay...Also, although the flow was gud I thought the rhyme scheme on both verses was fairly simple, add a bit more complexity and yo shit will be off tha chain...
Gud Song, Respect To Both...
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Uppin, if yall gon' sleep on stuff, I might as well not post anything else
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