Industry(Anomalistical Minds) vs. Wall Street(The Establishment)

wow wall street took this if you ak me

I Just feel wall's personal were way better and hit much Harder and he attacked everything from Industry's name to his custom tittle to his sig and he did a nice job with all of his meta's

Industry you came decent but I've seen much better you just lacked all around in this one not that it was horrible just not enought to win this battle

V/Wall

I personally Like industrys punches better and he had a much better closer.

Please come through and vote on my battle with Above:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...3&page=2&pp=15

Bold Point
This Dude Cant find His Thoughts Like he''s Mentally Insane
Might Ass well Call This Dude G-Unit The way He Rappin Without Game
4/5
No "Fuck Your Momma Joke" But I'm Sonning This Kid
Cuz If It Wasn't For Wall Street No Industries Would Exist
2/5
This Dude Couldnt make Wins even if He was a Ceiling fan
Cuz Ill Make Him Change How he Is In The Inside Like MiniVans
3/5
Only Ill When You State Your Location, Just Stop In Your Place
Tried An ILL-Evolution But Even The Nurse In Your Sig Shot It Away
3/5
And Your Crew's Not Soaring, And There's Nothing You Can Do For Em'
The Next Level? Can't Even Get Off The Bottom Of The Crew Forum
3/5
The Scared Kid From Chi-Town Ill Wins This About, Sorry B-
I Messed That Up A Bit................^ I Forgot The Apostrophe
2/5

Industry
Kids wack, if he had a chance ya plane raps ruptured it too.
Highjacked aircrafts are known to keep better structure n’you
4/5
Establishment houses piss-poor talent… yea it’s a burden
So when WallStreet asked to join em…they gladly said urine.
3/5
Ya crew aint established shit, a lot more like retards for hire.
They rhyme so dull n cold, got FDNY tryna start up a fire.
3/5
Like reliving 9/11 again n again, not cuz im frontin or racist..
But cuz Wall Street gets shutdown…on a continual basis
3/5
Worthless fuckin animal, I bearly consider you a citizen
Son ya livestock is falling, n it aint paying-out dividends
2/5
Fag theres no rules to bend, it’s a fact, not a theory or trend
All the streets an Industry plows, eventually come to an end.
3/5

Bold Point - 17/30
Industry - 18/30

Vote = Industry

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=208743
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=208945

could u vote on one of those battles please?..or if u have tiem..cud u check both of them out?

Meh.

Wall- Punches were okay i guess. Personals were blah, some were played concepts. Directivity and consistency is a must. YOu had that in some lines, but mose were haymakers. NOt bad on punches, the flow was decent and ya structure was not bad. Overall decent verse.

Indu-Not bad, punches were there, nice personals. Directivity hmmmm..meh, the consistency so-so, but the flow was good and the structure was okay as well. Come creative more, and directly. Overall decent as well

V/ Indu

ReasoN: Punches hit harder and were more direct in a few lines. Wall, you threw them but some of them flew overhead with some minor flaws in it. Not bad, keep it up yall. 1

i like boldd he/she came harder and was bettr overall

i mean industry me fault

Indu-Not bad, punches were there, nice personals. Directivity hmmmm..meh, the consistency so-so, but the flow was good and the structure was okay as well. Come creative more, and directly. Overall decent as well...Nice work...wording could've been better and ur punches weren't as well thought out as they could have been....but they worked none the less....man I have seen better from you before, but....8/10

Wall-Nice as well...one thing you needed was wordplay and it was aiight verse too and I enjoyed it, but without wordplay ya verse has no creativity and makes the punches weaker....I give you a...6/10

v/Indus....better verse

Upping for votes.

Leave links Ill check em out.

piece.

link my vs. illiterate after he spits

Breakdown

Bold Point

This Dude Cant find His Thoughts Like he''s Mentally Insane
Might Ass well Call This Dude G-Unit The way He Rappin Without Game
^ played

No "Fuck Your Momma Joke" But I'm Sonning This Kid
Cuz If It Wasn't For Wall Street No Industries Would Exist
^ Not bad...

This Dude Couldnt make Wins even if He was a Ceiling fan
Cuz Ill Make Him Change How he Is In The Inside Like MiniVans
^ Nope
Only Ill When You State Your Location, Just Stop In Your Place
Tried An ILL-Evolution But Even The Nurse In Your Sig Shot It Away
^ Nothing hard hitting

And Your Crew's Not Soaring, And There's Nothing You Can Do For Em'
The Next Level? Can't Even Get Off The Bottom Of The Crew Forum
^ OK
The Scared Kid From Chi-Town Ill Wins This About, Sorry B-
I Messed That Up A Bit................^ I Forgot The Apostrophe
^ Wack finisher

I can see what you're trying to do. I think if you just put a little more work into it and focus on the opponent more, that should do the trick.

Industry

Kids wack, if he had a chance ya plane raps ruptured it too.
Highjacked aircrafts are known to keep better structure n’you
^ Pretty good. Could've been worded better though

Establishment houses piss-poor talent… yea it’s a burden
So when WallStreet asked to join em…they gladly said urine.
^ LoL

Ya crew aint established shit, a lot more like retards for hire.
They rhyme so dull n cold, got FDNY tryna start up a fire.
^ pretty clever

Like reliving 9/11 again n again, not cuz im frontin or racist..
But cuz Wall Street gets shutdown…on a continual basis
^ Very nice punch

Worthless fuckin animal, I bearly consider you a citizen
Son ya livestock is falling, n it aint paying-out dividends
^ OK

Fag theres no rules to bend, it’s a fact, not a theory or trend
All the streets an Industry plows, eventually come to an end.
^ Could've been better

Good work. I think you need a little more consistancy in your verse man but I think this was enough to work. Nice wordplay and the punches were quite good

V/ Industry (for a more consistent verse with better disses) not a bad battle though.

Please could you hit up a link in my sig. Thankyou.