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I gotta agree with everyone else. And this shit describes the hell outta me, LoL. I liked the topic, the rhyme scheme, and the use of words. I thought more creativity coulda been used, but we both know that aint a big deal. Keep your good shit comin, and I will keep readin... nice work hommie...
( plz return the favor and check " Dont Be Fooled " in the Open Mic )
Man da flow was tight ...... and da word play was decent....sumtin like a dictionary
All in All it was tight
One word....fantastic. this was an awesome drop. Keep doing this and ull be in the top 5 best on this site!! anyways flow id give a 8.5/10, rhymes id give 9/10, structure id give a 9.5/10, and vocab id give a 9.5 out of 10. so overall id give you a 9/10...awesome job. If i wanna know what i need to improve, ill check out one of your drops and find out how a real rap on RB is made. Incredible drop.
Nice drop...Very relatable...Flow was good throughout...Structure was also pretty good...Vocab was solid...Content was good and had some emotion in there to help convey your point...There could have been a little better imagery in there but I still felt what you were saying and could relate...All in all a good drop...Like I said, it's a very relatable piece...Keep up the good work and keep dropping...
Thanks Spokes and JJ.
Lick Wid, you copy and pasted MonStar's feedback.
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This piece was very well put together. It flowed real well and the vocab was very good. The words rhymed perfectly and under a constant and well rounded topic, which i can perfectly relate to. 9/10