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There wasnt multies in this piece cause i dont write a verse the same way i can easily do multies check out a piece of mine called: The Real Me.
That verse has mad multies inside rhymes.
Uppin this for the last time, i was happy with the feed, im working on something this afternoon so there'll be something hot on here 2moro.
Nicee i really liked it..... great flow.. it went really well.... nice topic hahahaha... the structure was nice. the rhymes were tight i liekd them alot exspeccially line 2its awesome i think u have a lot of potencial ur really good overall 10/10 !!!!!!!!!!! keep it up :)Quote:
smoke so much green you'd think i had yoda in my blunt