^ finally..sumone understands thersz metaphores underneath this.. upin
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^ finally..sumone understands thersz metaphores underneath this.. upin
Bump.. i guess its too long.. blah
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Oh this is the cut right here. For real. My boy Makeshyft seizes to amaze me everytime. I didnt think it could get any better after Ur last drop, but I was wrong. The plot to this story, with the lifes of the three and how their intwined is just...priceless. And Ur so descriptive with it, and U could use that large vocabulary without messing with the flow at all. I felt U could have been more descriptive in the beginning though, when U very telling about what each of them did. But thats about all that I found wrong about this. The emotion was deep, and I could feel it throughout the whole drop. Another great piece...
Overall rate - 10/10