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I feel that whole verse cuz. Nice structure to the flow. Nice concept. Stayed on subject. Really gave me the feeling that he was telling the truth.
Kinda reminded me of Eminem. Vocab could step up a bit but all in all, nice verse.
Please help me bring closure to my four open threads
this was straight man sho'nuff true! i know personally, just from life and seein and observin different people and places i seen and been and from previous experiences of my own. if young cats had better examples alot of the madness could be elimated but niggaz (not just black people but anybody) tend to settle because it aint no positivity in the music. thats where everybody gettin ideas from and people scared to promote positive shit in fears that they gone be broke. thats me all day its alot of shit i wanna say but im like 'na im cool let me get on a track and shoot somebody' when in reality i was only heavy in the streets like that for like 2 yrs when i came outta jail i was tryin 2 b coo on all that shit. i was tryin to hustle it was about music and money but im still bangin through my music cause thats whats sellin so its alot of shit. i just wish you would have expanded more its so much that can b said my comment is longer than your verse so thats the only down but the concept is hot so keep doin that shit
strong message, real good ryme sheme, structure makes it easy ta read, ice cold nigga