Train Tracks.

Alrighty, since you wont leave me alone about hitting this.. *sigh*.. Ha, im just kidding.

Alright, as Kost said, i really liked the opener that was just a great way, to start of what is great ... to come.. Lol.. yeah!
I really liked the multies, that just.. that made the flow magnificient, and it just expanded my nipples (because i was so excited) and the concept was great, nice little picture at the top. As Nameless said, the second stanza was also my favorite, the beginning was nice, but the second was just crazy awesome.

Nice to see there is another piece coming soon, i shall look for it.. and keep them coming!

Gut-bye.

thanks man....Bounce!

K, the kid on RV is declining the fact he bit. You can see by the thread. All he's gotten was a warning for biting. If you really want to get this kid banned, can we get some definite proof? The actual time you dropped this piece compared to when he did, or something?

lmfao.......whats your aim or msn?

[QUOTE]

Quote:

---

I couldn’t lend help, he kept hitting, testing his physical fitness
As I was forced to pay attention to murder, as a silenced witness

---

great multies

Quote:

---

An ordinary night, no longer bright as the clouds swallowed the sky
Coached in my favorite spot, viewing heaven but caught hell in my eye
The air was dry, so I could focus on two outlines in the distance
A girl forcing with resistance, but a man out powering with persistence
In an instant, the man striked her with a blow no one could defend
My tongue hit the back of my throat as my spine stood on end

---

great rhymes and flow

overall 9/10, good drop :)

This drop was GREAT!!
*great multies
*great rhymes
*great flow
*great topic( it caught my eye )
*GREAT JOB! :)
*9/10
*(hope to see another drop by you in the future

thanks j ...word to these replys real dope

Bounce.

Last i guess.

Good shit..i liked the whole thing...i liked how it all rhymed...it all flowed perfectly together...and i like the title too....lol...well u are a vet at this it seems, so i guess keep it up..

peep mine if possoble..its in my sig

Very nice rhymes, you pieced that together nicely.

An ordinary night, no longer bright as the clouds swallowed the sky
Coached in my favorite spot, viewing heaven but caught hell in my eye...

That was one of the many lines you put together well. The flow on it was quality. Some of the other lines I like have been mentioned above so I will not go into the details. So good stuff all round, hopefully the next stuff you write will be just as good...

thank you.