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i guess since LLL wont put up with you, you perade F.L like a bitch
and its not that newb's find yu good everyone else just lost interest
-nice opener
i guess Aines finally found his true calling now he's addicted to chrit
in all honesty ur better of banned son so we wont ave to suffer ur shit
-alright
like fat fucks at weight watcher's this bitch is yearnin for *lightweight*
its ironic how this bitch rep's Animosity yet he still intends "no hate"
- im not saying u bit this, but ive heard it somewhere
dont even see ur name in Elite not surprisin even in F.l u got no hope
F.L is a battle area not a circus ring but i see y u walk the tight rope
-am feeling that
your text careers predictable writen out for u like the back of a leaflet
this aint no pornographic site but still Aines is a bitch it aint no secret
-decent
only one good thing came of you cus in fairness you have consistancy
i duno how u do it but ur shit is just as wack now as it was back in '03
- nice nice
its amazin like althletes breakin records how this bitch prey's on a newb
but see's his dreams wither like his punches devourd like B.K's fast food
- nice
give it up Aines cus the only thing you've master on this site is freepostin
f'real we wouldnt feel your presence even if your verse was ghost written
- not too flash
get back on Aim bitch gather your congregation show em who's sick
............so called 'vet' the only time he's held his own
..................................was in his left clenchin his dick....bitch
-bit of a fucked up structure here, but nice closer
vs
This kids nuffin but washed up talent,his flows dried out
A name full of numbers, even he's beginning to doubt
- dont know what the other guy was thinking, but that does rhyme
Owned by my fellow crew member, your already beat
droppin 2 bars agaisnt ur verse,has u admittin defeat
- not really dissing him tho
Victorys sweet,you got beat by a girl,damn yo jus quit
*peeps ur verses*you got more chance beatin her sayin
called out chrit,
-aight
haha who do you think you are? a vet?
Chrit > lil solja, and you told her to give up text
- not really hurting him agian
Your lines suck dont even start this kid ive diminished
Cause how you gone be called 321...
..........................................but never get to finish
-nice closer
v/ 32123- stronger punches overall. aines didnt diss him enough to
i guess since LLL wont put up with you, you perade F.L like a bitch
and its not that newb's find you good everyone else just lost interest
i guess Aines finally found his true calling now he's addicted to chrit
in all honesty ur better of banned son so we wont ave to suffer ur shit
like fat fucks at weight watcher's this bitch is yearnin for *lightweight*
its ironic how this bitch rep's Animosity yet he still intends "no hate"
dont even see ur name in Elite not surprisin even in F.l u got no hope
F.L is a battle area not a circus ring but i see y u walk the tight rope
your text careers predictable writen out for u like the back of a leaflet
this aint no pornographic site but still Aines is a bitch it aint no secret
only one good thing came of you cus in fairness you have consistancy
i duno how u do it but ur shit is just as wack now as it was back in '03
its amazin like althletes breakin records how this bitch prey's on a newb
but see's his dreams wither like his punches devourd like B.K's fast food
give it up Aines cus the only thing you've master on this site is freepostin
f'real we wouldnt feel your presence even if your verse was ghost written
get back on Aim bitch gather your congregation show em who's sick
............so called 'vet' the only time he's held his own
..................................was in his left clenchin his dick....bitch
6/10
This kids nuffin but washed up talent,his flows dried out
A name full of numbers, even he's beginning to doubt
Owned by my fellow crew member, your already beat
droppin 2 bars agaisnt ur verse,has u admittin defeat
Victorys sweet,you got beat by a girl,damn yo jus quit
*peeps ur verses*you got more chance beatin her sayin
called out chrit,
Chrit > lil solja, and you told her to give up text
Your lines suck dont even start this kid ive diminished
Cause how you gone be called 321...
..........................................but never get to finish
5/10
321 gets my vote ! kinda of a nice battle from both
no poll your vote
uppin
i agree this was a nice battle aine you came hard in this and so did yuo street play but i have to give this one to street play for having a better over all verse and having more punches and your strcuture came almost a tie but good battle no beefQuote:
Originally Posted by AHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!
v321
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v/ Aines...
321 came far too simplistic and stretched, didnt like a single line and it all took too much strength to read let alone like any of it. nothing really stood out, no intelligence behind any of it with any punches in there not hitting hard enough.
i've seen Aines come a lot harder than this in the past, but done just enough to beat this. lines weren't stretched and the content was a lot better than 321's, witht he last line far better than the whole of 321's verse in my opinion. Aines at least showed some kind of thought behind his verse and it showed...
Sorry 312123123131 but aines had this...
Im not gonna break it down but 3123123 you need to just work on being less played
=(
All else I gotta say is why the fuck is everyone saying that Aines last two lines are dope? I mean they're coo but nothing like WHOAMG genius!
v/ - Aines.
32123: Oh jeeze...it was an okay verse, but yet i think you deffinately could of came harder and could of done much better on this because i have seen better. Some lines did seem somewhat stretched and your punches didnt always follow through. Yes some punches were nice and others were kinda like blah.. They could of been set up differently and woudlve had more of an effect...Some lines seemed more like fillers more than anything else too..i know u could of done better...
Aines: Okay, not bad of a verse, it was good. Your punches were okay...some werent too effective, but maybe it was just becasue of the rewording that made them seem less effective and direct. I think some lines seemed kinda forced too...and u had to explain a lot of things instead of just coming out with it clearer...Other than that it was an okay verse...
Close battle...but
v/aines.