-Twizted- vs. Skitzo [PB Boot Match]

Skit



I’m like a paparazzi I’m here to make ya punk “ass” famous
Cuz “Twizted” goes both ways, flip his alias name he prefers men’s anis (sinamen)
Lol Nice punch 9/10
Listen to me and listen carefully you can’t beat me you’ll neva be half as nice
If rap was b-ball you’ll have a better chance of breaking “brick” dan “breaking ice”
Good wordplay 8.5/10
I’ve sunken ships, made emcee fall in defeat, but this is a real challenge to beat
So I take Twiztidhole spit on him and “bury” him 6 feet “deep“(his aim: Twiztidhole)
Nice Punch But first part was..Emm a little self glory which I no like 7/10
Harry Potter accused me of cheating so I might get banned and DQed
Lucky you, cuz that’s the only way that I’ll be unable to beat you
Nope. 4/10
Ya “one way ticket” to Pandora’s Box has made a “round trip” back for talking smack
Cuz aint no way out of a lost from a motherfucking boot match
Weak Closer. 6/10

Overall: 34.5/50

Sin
White lies? Hell... Your writings obsurd, why not duck G...
When the first two white words in your sig are "fuck me"
Idk.. 7/10
So quit babblin'... your losing isn't giving out hardcore hunches
I'm a 14 year old asshole.. whoops, there goes all your punches
Wow best punch Ive seen in a LONG time 10/10
Time to quit your fuckin' actin... Get your ass back in rehearsal
Worst slack n', I've seen better 'skitz' in Burger King commercials
Funny 8/10
You sink to win... No luck, the whole crowd knows your gonna fall
And I'd 'Think Again', But fuck.... that's if it took any thought at all
Lol 'nother nice punch 9/10
I'm murderin you bitch.. Death is near, I'll tip you and leave the smash
So let both of us drop a "tear", cuz I just fuckin ripped you in half
Wasnt feelin the closer. 7/10

Overall: 41/50


V=SinAmen

Oh, the wordplay at the ending (for some who dont get it)

Tear = cry

and can also mean, Tearing a paper.

Hope everyone gets it.

I’m like a paparazzi I’m here to make ya punk “ass” famous
Cuz “Twizted” goes both ways, flip his alias name he prefers men’s anis (sinamen)
^^good, but I don't see the point in the quotes, if anything they were only needed around "men's anis"
Listen to me and listen carefully you can’t beat me you’ll neva be half as nice
If rap was b-ball you’ll have a better chance of breaking “brick” dan “breaking ice”
^^not bad
I’ve sunken ships, made emcee fall in defeat, but this is a real challenge to beat
So I take Twiztidhole spit on him and “bury” him 6 feet “deep“(his aim: Twiztidhole)
^^not bad 2nd line, 1st line is a waste of space
Harry Potter accused me of cheating so I might get banned and DQed
Lucky you, cuz that’s the only way that I’ll be unable to beat you
^^unoriginal basic punch
Ya “one way ticket” to Pandora’s Box has made a “round trip” back for talking smack
Cuz aint no way out of a lost from a motherfucking boot match
^^ok

vs.

White lies? Hell... Your writings obsurd, why not duck G...
When the first two white words in your sig are "fuck me"
^^hehe good
So quit babblin'... your losing isn't giving out hardcore hunches
I'm a 14 year old asshole.. whoops, there goes all your punches
^^ok
Time to quit your fuckin' actin... Get your ass back in rehearsal
Worst slack n', I've seen better 'skitz' in Burger King commercials
^^not bad
You sink to win... No luck, the whole crowd knows your gonna fall
And I'd 'Think Again', But fuck.... that's if it took any thought at all
^^not bad
I'm murderin you bitch.. Death is near, I'll tip you and leave the smash
So let both of us drop a "tear", cuz I just fuckin ripped you in half
^^don't get the relevance and the quotes, but ok, rhyme kinda off

based on that Twizted takes it by quite a small margin.
RTF drop an honest vote in the sig, thanks

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Gremlin

So quit babblin'... your losing isn't giving out hardcore hunches
I'm a 14 year old asshole.. whoops, there goes all your punches
Wow best punch Ive seen in a LONG time 10/10

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it was his weakest punch.

v/ Sin-in-Men

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skitzo-
I’m like a paparazzi I’m here to make ya punk “ass” famous
Cuz “Twizted” goes both ways, flip his alias name he prefers men’s anis (sinamen)
...aight decent opener......
Listen to me and listen carefully you can’t beat me you’ll neva be half as nice
If rap was b-ball you’ll have a better chance of breaking “brick” dan “breaking ice”
..alright...
I’ve sunken ships, made emcee fall in defeat, but this is a real challenge to beat
So I take Twiztidhole spit on him and “bury” him 6 feet “deep“(his aim: Twiztidhole)
...decent.....
Harry Potter accused me of cheating so I might get banned and DQed
Lucky you, cuz that’s the only way that I’ll be unable to beat you
...eh ok....
Ya “one way ticket” to Pandora’s Box has made a “round trip” back for talking smack
Cuz aint no way out of a lost from a motherfucking boot match
...ok closer....
overall-7/10
alright ok verse...decent punches; personals...couldve came harder. you just werent that creative. up the game a little bit. but not too bad.

twizted-
White lies? Hell... Your writings obsurd, why not duck G...
When the first two white words in your sig are "fuck me"
...nice opener...
So quit babblin'... your losing isn't giving out hardcore hunches
I'm a 14 year old asshole.. whoops, there goes all your punches
....hehe nice...
Time to quit your fuckin' actin... Get your ass back in rehearsal
Worst slack n', I've seen better 'skitz' in Burger King commercials
..nice personal....
You sink to win... No luck, the whole crowd knows your gonna fall
And I'd 'Think Again', But fuck.... that's if it took any thought at all
...decent....
I'm murderin you bitch.. Death is near, I'll tip you and leave the smash
So let both of us drop a "tear", cuz I just fuckin ripped you in half
...nice, witty closer...
overall-9/10
pretty good verse here. came with some creative and effective punches. good structure and flow too. you came harder here.

v/twizted

White lies? Hell... Your writings obsurd, why not duck G...
When the first two white words in your sig are "fuck me"
Time to quit your fuckin' actin... Get your ass back in rehearsal
Worst slack n', I've seen better 'skitz' in Burger King commercials
You sink to win... No luck, the whole crowd knows your gonna fall
And I'd 'Think Again', But fuck.... that's if it took any thought at all

vs

Listen to me and listen carefully you can’t beat me you’ll neva be half as nice
If rap was b-ball you’ll have a better chance of breaking “brick” dan “breaking ice”


very 1 sided here.

v/Twizted