Thanks . Uppin for more feed
Thanks . Uppin for more feed
Very Emotional duval.
I feel you alot girl, this had amazing emotion, and if it comes from the heart, then who cares if its good or not, the important thing is that you had the guts to write this about them. You have gained my 100 % respect. P.S this is Harry Potter :)
*stands Up* Ovation
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Peace :love:
Aww thanks. I'll check your open mic. :love: :hump:
Come on peoples I need to know wassup with this. I have like 2 other open mics I wanna do. I need to know what I need to work on so i can edit it. I'll take all feed back, bad good or whateva. I'll leave feed back on whateva a battle open mic or whateva. Uppin this.
it was very emotionally driven... which isnt a bad thing...
I wont get into the critical parts of this cuz CRITICLY...it isnt that good....
but i will leave critical feedback on something i feel comfortable doing it on...
good luck
hit my OM
Its all good. All feed is welcome like I said.
Uppin this one mo' gin. Tell me wassup with this
I thought is was good and some stuff and emotion was good...The structure was ok and the story was nice and people should remember them...Good verse and keep posting and elevating
Thanks. I will elevate, I'll have a new OM posted tomorrow. Leave links i'll rtf.
Was cool. Deep I liked it. You have some skill compared to most girls I've seen. No hate to the ladies. ;) Keep it up. :thumbup:
Thanks, Uppin for feed.
first of all thats sad for what happen i know what it like to lose sum1 u care for and its very hard trying to write a piece bout them
the piece was good not too many vocab usage but still good and u had some parts that didnt have a good word structure but the rest was good it was very deep i can almost feel what u were feeling u kno
very good job on this piece
and i want to wish u good luck and that life will always go on and they are now with god in a safe place
so nice piece
wow they ment 10 lines to you?
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Originally Posted by Edicius
I couldn't write much for them, I didn't know them. So whateva.
Thanks for the feed.
Uppin this for the last time. I got a new OM I want to post. Just give me a lil more feed. I'll RTF even on a battle. Tell me wassup with this. Be honest, tell if u think its dumb, nice,emotional ecy. Tell me somethin.