ok,thx man.I appretiate it
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ok,thx man.I appretiate it
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=198080
thx man, i appretiate it, by the way, good drop:)
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This was a nice piece I could actually see the everything you was talking about in my head. The end to me seemed rushed. But this was an overall great piece 9/10
thnx much apprecaited !
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The only thing a little off was wording. I really liked this piece though. It took me back to the days of Now&Laters and Chico Sticks, flipping off the swings, playing football and all the fun shit you do as a kid in the summer time. Nice. Just work on that working and rhymescheme.
I felt emotion in it and I liked the beginning part...Were u saying u tossed blossoms on ur friends graves or what...I liked that part probably the best and the part when u decribed the sky...It was an aight drop...nice imagery...keep elevating and dropping
thnc for the advice
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yo that was deep dawg.....ya threw in a lot of complexity, which iz a plus....I'm feelin ya man....keep dat shyt up...I'll b lookin out fa more threadz soon!
thnx bruh -1-
Nice word play, try making it more plaesing to the eye..
remember this is noy a battle, Needs to catch my attention more
6/10