Mind I'ma be stright.. It's been a damn long ass time since me and you have collabed so you hit me up on aim.. But this piece was nice I loved the metaphors in every stanza.. Keep writing your one of the best if not the best poet here..
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Mind I'ma be stright.. It's been a damn long ass time since me and you have collabed so you hit me up on aim.. But this piece was nice I loved the metaphors in every stanza.. Keep writing your one of the best if not the best poet here..
Beautiful. I like the way u blended the metaphors in with the imagery.
i agree. beautiful imagery. was into by the first stanza. Keep it up!Quote:
Originally Posted by The Revolution
Amazingly deep i mean wow if you got any deeper youd fall in (yea bad pun) but really i like the imagery and i have to agree the vocab wasen't the best but the metaphors made up for it completly