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Vote - Skitzo
Ryda you had a pretty weak verse with not many hard hitting punches you need to aim more at the opponent with your diss. Your lines didnt flow too well and some lines were stretched but overal structure was aight. Skit your drop was decent man nice job. Structure was nice and punches were good but some were weak with an ok flow threw out.
vote- Skitzo
He had better punches an flow...
not vote-ryda cuz he didnt have punches or a good flow. ( elevate )
ryda you had a good opener but it got me lost when you said daisey.. i beleave you have to diss the opponent... Then when i kept reading an it was wack... my vote started slippping more towards skitzo....
when i read skitzo's he defended himself while dissing you.... so my vote is skitzo
v/S
yo i'mma give this 2 ryda.........this battle wasnt the best n i hope u can still od better, u were level par on structure n flow, but it came down 2 punches and rdya's hit home more
v/ryda
my vote goes to skitoz cuz
nightryda shoudhave came wit some betta stuff
for tha record wat is bc?
N: Your verse was weak. You tried using personals but they werent hittin hard or anything special. I saw some punches but they werent really hitten hard either, they were pretty wack. Lose some self glory and come more original rather than played. Use better vocab and reword some lines to make it sound better and make the punches seem to hit harder bcuz your verse wasnt goood at all. Elevate..
S: Okay, pretty good, decent. Flow and structure was a lot better. Punches were harder, some weak, but for the most part they hit harder than his. Personals were okaay..couldve beeen better though. Same thing with the reworded lines...Better vocab couldve been used but overall your verse was a lot better than his.
v/skitzo : Having harder hitting punches and a better all around verse.
rtf please in my sig (honestly).