Its On My Ssig Where It Says Bitch Made Sonic Click There!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Its On My Ssig Where It Says Bitch Made Sonic Click There!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'd rather blow off both of my ears than hear your bickering
Only thing thats 'straiight' about you is your '21 victories'*
=Ok open, get the concept but in a way its a compliment too=
After finding out preists abusing children, he quickly converts
Hes Afraid to come out of the closet because "DaTrus hurtz"
=Played idea, but you worded it well ok hit=
This nigga couldn't dick ride votes if he was fucked by a car
And your legs stay opened longer than the pic in your avatar*
=meh not feeling this, attempted personal but avatar line is weak=
This niggas so upset saying my words are evil and malicious
'Da trus' is my rhymes will slaughter you and your military militia*
=ehh ok, top line is filler..bottom line is glory only ok cuz you talk about his sig=
Your rhymes leave me crying like chopped onions... Their sad
After asked how it was battling untold, he says "It hurts... Bad"*
=pretty good closer, meta on top bar is basic but serves purpose.=
VS.
Fat as fuck n' uglier than mold, no one's ever called you lean
Some things are better left untold... you're better off unseen!
=Strong opener, witty and funny like this=
And I'm sorry to be mean, but I'll leave the fag bleedin n shit
In this battle I'm taking the lead.... and stabbing you with it!
=meh ok, some play with words not really relevent to untold tho=
Go leave n' just quit, girls run up to you and then just split
His idea of a blind date......... is with an actual blind bitch!
=more wit, kinda funny ok punch=
N' I have had enough of your shit, your callouts are too much
And when great mindz collide....... your STILL left untouched!
=good peronal=
Calling out vets n' such, they've all thrown you in the crapper
Since when does lots of LOSING ever make ya a better rapper?
=more personals, like the closer but 'thrown you in the crapper' is a simple idea almost a filler=
Decent battle here, Untold came alright with the punches and incorporated a few metas inbetween. Think you coulda come more wittier and made your verse complex a lot of the punches seemed based on general statements, not much to think about. Datrush had a real stronger opener the dis/punch was personal and had some wordplay with Untold's name. I think all-around Datrush wanted this one more and came harder with punches also using wordplay and just clever ideas to make em' hit harder.
Vote/Datrush
I'd rather blow off both of my ears than hear your bickering
Only thing thats 'straiight' about you is your '21 victories'*
Good Personals Okay Open
After finding out preists abusing children, he quickly converts
Hes Afraid to come out of the closet because "DaTrus hurtz"
Played Concept Man Get Something New
This nigga couldn't dick ride votes if he was fucked by a car
And your legs stay opened longer than the pic in your avatar*
Weak Man This Part Needs To COme Harder
This niggas so upset saying my words are evil and malicious
'Da trus' is my rhymes will slaughter you and your military militia*
Self Glory Man No No
Your rhymes leave me crying like chopped onions... Their sad
After asked how it was battling untold, he says "It hurts... Bad"*
Aiight Decent Closer Man
VS.
Fat as fuck n' uglier than mold, no one's ever called you lean
Some things are better left untold... you're better off unseen!
Good Shit Man Nice Opener
And I'm sorry to be mean, but I'll leave the fag bleedin n shit
In this battle I'm taking the lead.... and stabbing you with it!
Aiight Decent Good Wordplay Man
Go leave n' just quit, girls run up to you and then just split
His idea of a blind date......... is with an actual blind bitch!
Nice punch Man Creative
N' I have had enough of your shit, your callouts are too much
And when great mindz collide....... your STILL left untouched!
Nice Personal Hah
Calling out vets n' such, they've all thrown you in the crapper
Since when does lots of LOSING ever make ya a better rapper?
Aiight Filler But Still Cool
Vote-Da