th-C v. BrainSurgeon -------ELITE

this goes to c but this was a close battle but he pulled it out

whats with these anymore lightweight with one line analyses voting??

this nigga cryin.

this is my last up anyway. I'll RTF................................................... ..

Yo th-c took this one away for real because of the harder punches and th-c's were more clearer and even though it was close , Brian surgeon had an nice opener but both of ya'll keep elevating

Brainsurgen...good shit mayne....u had good flo partly through the verse...was very weak in sum parts......

Th-C......dope name mayne......good hist overall...better vocab.....better flow through out the verse...keep ya shit up..

vote/Th-C

uppping

votes must be well explained

minimum:

Opener
Punches
Personals
Nameflips
Flow
Multis
Wordplay
Metas
Similes
Complexity
Creativity
Originality
Consistency
Vocab
Closer

Pick at least two strong lines from both battlers

Vote, then add Comments explaining your vote, if you can be bother, anyway

.....if you can't vote like that, you're not qualified to vote

.....if you don't get any of the lines from both of the battlers don't vote

upping......

Quote:

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Originally Posted by BrainSurgeon

this homosexual claims to be a battler, but he's really a mouse
I'll raise hell so bad........make T-Pee........ like AN INDIAN'S HOUSE
claims to be sick but like choir practise i'm just sparring with hymn
cuz Th-C's like Medusa........ Everyone he faces always Harder than Him
I've destroy sick textcees who rip whacks more clever than him
this fag can't diss me..why else can I flip my own name better than him
only time “T-C” mentioned with “Si-C” in electro-magnetic terms
Lighting Doesn't Strike Twice? it will after........ You've battle with Surge
the factual you really a baby and going against me's easily crazy
sorry you don't make the grade, if u were 2,40....still wouldnt be A, T

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Ehh...this was a pretty decent battle , but i wasnt feelin the indian bar ..you came really corney, and punchlines were hitten very hard..but you could have done better...
Keep it up

Quote:

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Originally Posted by th-C

bitten & played, you got no original concepts or a flow, cheater..
facin me I'd say you got balls..... but you don't got those either..
picture yourself dead, before I was here this was a lame thread..
in this battle I'm gunna blow brains out like kurt cobain's head..
kid's face red, embarrased he'll lose and will relate to the others..
'cause we know after rain drops....it goes straight to the gutter..
wtf at elite? neither of us are on the list, he's retarded friends..
surgeon wouldn't make the cut anyway..
..............................................like a samurai with parkinsons..
whatever..bottom line is you can't hang like skirts on coat hangers..
I'd make this line sayin how you're garbage...but that's a no brainer..

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Nice overall drop , had nice consistent punchlines ,pretty good personals , nice structure your lines were stretched , ....You had creatiivty , and you took this battle in my opionion keep it up

Vote th-C

I say the c smashed on that one. Brain Surgeon this joint for you, your grade scale nigga.

Here's an opener for BRAIN SURGEON
I swear to alah
you'll be murda'd
left with a STAINED TURBAN

For the punch line I'm HITTIN THE C
i'll hit ya
feed ya to the sharks
now your SHIT IN THE SEA

don't take it personal this is the RAP GAME
either you got it
or you don't
but it don't seem like shit's HAPP-NING

as for name flips sureon can't even OPERATE
you not a doc
so knock it off
i'll scalp you post mordum and CROP YOUR BRAIN

you want a flow well here it is, you HOMO'S HEARIN THIS?
I ain't a blood
I ain't a crip
I'm just a SOLO LYRICIST

as far as multis Im the one that BANG IT
I go hard
you a cold fart
that mean you AIN'T SHIT

word play, play on words CALL IT A PUN
you got beef
turn up the heat
watch me HAUL IN THE BUNS

similies, comparitives, i'm like a CHEETAH ON PROWL
lay low like snakes
quiet as a mouse
like a silent assaissin I keep my FEET OFF THE GROUND

COMPLEX that's out of the CONTEXT
BOMB SEX
ya MOM NEXT
this ain't a CONTEST you know who's flow is the STRONGEST

creativity and originality are the SAME ASS THING
so picture this
I'm an Eagle
you a bird that AIN'T GOT WINGS

I'm as consistant as a STRAIGHT A STUDENT
do my work
pass the test
this is a GRADE A BLUEPRINT

my vocabulary like a cap in your CAPILLARY
transbundent pnuemonic
phillosophical phenominal
my flow espn i need COMMENTARY

to close it out im on fire HOSE IT OUT
you ashses to ashes
dust to dust
as yoda would say "nothin, is what these HOE'S IS BOUT"

^^^ wow your lame

Flow: Surge.. the multies made it sound nicer as well
Punches:Surge
Multies: Surge
Meta's/Simlies: Surge....killed him with that medussa line
Vocab:neither really
Structure:Same
Enjoyment: Surge

Vote: Surge

Explination Surge: He came with that tight opner funny meta's nice overall flow and he had multies. However i didnt get the last line?

claims to be sick but like choir practise i'm just sparring with hymn
cuz Th-C's like Medusa........ Everyone he faces always Harder than Him

that bar killed you right there that shit is DOPE keep it up!

Explination ThC: I admitt you came pretty hard started with a pretty funny first bar. then you did the curt cobain thing thats played heard that many a times. Samurai parkisons line was decent nothing special. ended it pretty funny too. Your pretty good its just that Surge is better and came more complex thats all ive got to say good battle~!

explanation for last line

sorry you don't make the grade, if u were 2,40....still wouldnt be A, T

2,40 = 2x40 = 80........ an A is a good grade, and defines excellent, so now you understand:

sorry you don't make the grade, if u were 2,40 (2x40)....still wouldnt be A, T

yo th-c return the fava in my battle against magik