^and thats word...my dad got shot (died, b4 i was born) so this aint no shit to play witQuote:
Originally Posted by Neglegent
if its true then an alright piece...over wise get a life :thumbup:
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^and thats word...my dad got shot (died, b4 i was born) so this aint no shit to play witQuote:
Originally Posted by Neglegent
if its true then an alright piece...over wise get a life :thumbup:
... wat's wit y'all niggaz? it's real how many fuckin times i gotta say dudes? now quit sayin that u dont think this shit is real and leave sum real feed, there's only been 2 good ones! This shit is real aight! now i dont wanna say that shit no mo'... uppin fools
Ha Ha ^^^ oh my gosh, i love to see a nigger get madQuote:
Originally Posted by ta2_tears
It was aight nothing to crazy to really stun me...u had some aight ideas..basically everything was aight it was an average drop to me...u can keep elevating and shit but nice ideas and some good flow and feelings in some parts
its tight as hell dogg...good job yo
lol wtf u talkin bout trema, where the feed homie? ha u'd get mad 2! mothafucka's disrespectful! thanx fo da feed M. Pulsive... uppin
that was a good verse dawg keep it coming
thanx teers i guess... try n giv better feed... uppin
leave good feed bitches
drop feed y'all lazy muthafuckas.... uppin bitches
Yo i found dis shit pretty deep alot of emotion but better wording could have made it deeper and i've lost dawgs to so i know what it feels like..so just ignfore the niggas who sayign tis fake cause we cant just say dhit like dta only u know for sur..peace
thanx fo da feed homie, u got ne pieces u want me 2 check out man?
im not ganna knock you, i think if people are sayin that your not true they need to get a life
it wasnt the best drop by no means, but it was alright
keep at it elevate
uppin niggaz!
Im sorry about your losses man, and also about not replying sooner, but you shone in this piece with what you wanted, good work my brother.
First off, all those who mentioned vocab and flow and all that, you need to see where this piece is coming from... Thos thinking its fake, wtf's it to you?... This piece was from the heart imo, the emotion was stronger than I saw in a minute, you had a deep emotionful piece, what I think you sat down to write, this made me think... Its easy to lose anybody, btu getting over it is harder than you ever believe, I think you have a strong character to talk about this with such feeling, you expressed everything you wanted to, you came out and hit hard, a good way of putting it, you hit hard with this piece. I think your brother and your friends will appreciate you writing this for them, and also just live life now, because it could be you who remembers the one thing they want to be rememberd for... Now vocab, flow, structure blah! this was about emotion, this was about heart, and this was real... I enjoyed this piece but I wish you never had to write it.
Be easy man, take care of yourself,
peace
thanx issue man, im still keepin my cool like ya told me man.. it hard cuz i no tha muthafuckas who did it man... tryin 2 keep a focus on my son man... im stayin cool, jus fo' him... but, shit i dono, i might hav ta pull sum shit cuz rumor in tha hood iz, tha niggaz who popped my homies, they only capped them cuz they thought i was wit em... shits fucked up homie... tryin 2 stay focused... but i've changed man, im mo depressed now... and my baby mama jus left me.... lifes shitty homie