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Cr3c3kaJ@c:/
i think that dis was a really good battle c was holding his verse down and was throwing in some good punchlines but i think that he coulda made his verse even instead of jus writing it all over da place cause it made it confusin to read.
DVSmind
i think that D was throwing in good punchlines also but he was makin his verse flow better and it had better structure then C and made sure that u know when da bar ended.
// so overall i think dat DVSmind took dis one but good battle.
dat battle was straight it was hard to decide but i v/craka return da favor
rise
dvsmind cuz he had some nice punches and had aight structure he overall one this battle
All votes DQ'd except Vallie. the others were unexplained.
My verse is ya hurse with my flows i'm gifted
ya shirts on dirt cause u getin lifted
this boys a toy hes some fake shit
Rhyme like ya loss's all u do is take it
ill kill ya blood spill ya like edward scissor hands
Spit it yella like this fellas mouth got pissin glands
im the illa killa here as we all seen
text so sharp i lyrically remove ya spleen
leave more then ur mind a piece of waste
couldnt get a ill thought if my DVSMIND u taste
im blast ya away but u aint no jaugernaught
i just killed ya cause i got the better thought
i wuz listenin to ti's bring em out so try dat beat yall
holla
this was a good verse nice structure and every thing he get my vote
man how da hell can u vote 4 cracka dvs took dat hands down
another lose for them corp bitches god stop running and help your crew out
da greatest one u gettin yo ass killed as we speak and dvsmind is up 2-0 which is something u will never do
but hey sonic i get alot girl pussy and rip people everyday in face to face something y'all never do bitch
^^^ quit freepostin in my thread drop a vote
one sided to me.
cracka-good verse homie. ur structure was top notch making ur flow top notch. u had sum nice punches and personals and they landed. was really good. keep working on ur wordplay to make ur punches hit harder and try to be more creative. good job overall.
DVSMInd- aigh man wasn't a badd verse. flow and structure were aight. i really didn't see ne hard punches. no personals at all. just a lot of threats bout killing him and self glory. elevate on ur disses homie and really make the opponent feel dumb. keep writing.
v//cracka for overall better verse. (structure, flow, punches were harder)
RTF and check my topical battle in sig. it'd be appreciated. pz.
Crucial i like how your mind work word dog very spirtual thats what i like instead off these Corp bitch DVS no Cracka yes
yo greatest one fuck u u little bitch lets battle set it up u spittin 1st iiight u lil panzy bitch