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his games slain hes a lame brain and not better at all
he's gained fame?..no ima make this rook/slash veteran fall...
im serverin all ..you could be claimed sane only if ya tracks was good
leveling all..ill smash ya Main Frame an all thats left is scraps of wood...
you wack an should stop rapping ..cause you should be ready for fate
when im done crushing this lame is the only time he'll be heavy with weight...
no hate this fags slain....face facts this kids just played and lame,
your all the same..your Talent is like bad pics ..it never made the frame...
cats gay...on the real ima dim his chin THEN ima thin the win....
only time he pushes "send" with confidence is on M'S'N!!....
..keyed..hurry up an try an match it gay boy..
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Stop Freeposting Lil Jay.
thats your only warning.
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My punches will swell up your jaw, So just be prepared when I drop,
Becuase when a 'Doc Has His Handsfull',..He 'Tells Them To Cough'!!!!
You don't want it with Frame,...It's obvious you in love with a gay,
Cuz just like 'Queer Clocks',....U'd prolly let '60 men nut' on ya face!!!!
Quickly I'm Rippin This Faggot, I told you this Kid Wasn't That Sick,
So I'll 'treat his body like the world',......And let it 'Spin On My Axis'!!!!
You being Sick Is Hardly,...So I'ma take it easy and Rip You Softly,
Cuz me vs You?, I leave 'no doubt behind',..Just like 'Gwen Stefani'!!!!
All my forces plunge, Punches sore this bum, Of course hes done,
Kids wack, He's 'spent more time on the bench' then 'forrest gump'!!!!!
*Murked!!!*
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Main
Nice Verse Man You Had Some Hot Ass Punches In Here That Was Dope You Also Had Some Hott Ass Vocabulary In Here, SHit Was Very Creative Man You Had Rhyme Scheme In Here That Was Nice, Hardly Anybody Has Rhyme Scheme These Days Keep This Work Up Man Your Hell Of Dope Man Throw In Some Multi's And Verse Is Perfect Cuzz
Doc
Aiight You Had Some Aiight Punches Dawg Nothing To Special, Your Verse Was Simple For The Fact of It You Also Had Bad Structure Which Is A Big Donwfall I nText Battles, Your Rhyme Scheme Was Terrible That's Another Downfall In These Kind Of Battles Vocabulary Was Basic Try Something New Man And COme Back To Battle Em Again Okay Verse Man
Vote-MainFrame
RTF THen I Will Poll On This Battle Man One
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his games slain hes a lame brain and not better at all
he's gained fame?..no ima make this rook/slash veteran fall...
im serverin all ..you could be claimed sane only if ya tracks was good
leveling all..ill smash ya Main Frame an all thats left is scraps of wood...
you wack an should stop rapping ..cause you should be ready for fate
when im done crushing this lame is the only time he'll be heavy with weight...
no hate this fags slain....face facts this kids just played and lame,
your all the same..your Talent is like bad pics ..it never made the frame...
cats gay...on the real ima dim his chin THEN ima thin the win....
only time he pushes "send" with confidence is on M'S'N!!....
Decent Verse, Some Decent Punches In There. Also Some Decent Personals You Have In There. Flow Is Wack, Along With Wordplay. Overall Its A Solid Verse, Nice Job Man, Keep It Up.
My punches will swell up your jaw, So just be prepared when I drop,
Becuase when a 'Doc Has His Handsfull',..He 'Tells Them To Cough'!!!!
You don't want it with Frame,...It's obvious you in love with a gay,
Cuz just like 'Queer Clocks',....U'd prolly let '60 men nut' on ya face!!!!
Quickly I'm Rippin This Faggot, I told you this Kid Wasn't That Sick,
So I'll 'treat his body like the world',......And let it 'Spin On My Axis'!!!!
You being Sick Is Hardly,...So I'ma take it easy and Rip You Softly,
Cuz me vs You?, I leave 'no doubt behind',..Just like 'Gwen Stefani'!!!!
All my forces plunge, Punches sore this bum, Of course hes done,
Kids wack, He's 'spent more time on the bench' then 'forrest gump'!!!!!
Alot Better Than Doc, Punches And Wordplay Were Alot Better Then His. No Personals Really But Its Ight Cause You Didnt Need Um.
Vote- MainFrame.
Reason- Better Punches.
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at last I think this was a long anticipated battle Doc you came aiight man all though personally after reading your other battles and all you shit talking I thought you would come hard and honestly man it wasnt there
Main you came consistent good word play nice punches the 60 men nut on your face line was funny as fuck dawg overall good battle but Main wins this one for all around better verse
V>Mainframe
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get it poppn.......................................
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yea MAIN this shit was hot punches hard,consistent everything above
I'm sayin the same shit they said
DOC no vocab use some words 2 mant times u got hidden talent probly
but main frame out step u
vote on my battle I looked out
v/main
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gottagetdem vs ceaser
topic(Let's get it on)
vote plz
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Uppin #1
Drop links, Will RTF.
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his games slain hes a lame brain and not better at all
he's gained fame?..no ima make this rook/slash veteran fall...
- naw
im serverin all ..you could be claimed sane only if ya tracks was good
leveling all..ill smash ya Main Frame an all thats left is scraps of wood...
- semi creative, weak punch.
you wack an should stop rapping ..cause you should be ready for fate
when im done crushing this lame is the only time he'll be heavy with weight...
- played.
no hate this fags slain....face facts this kids just played and lame,
your all the same..your Talent is like bad pics ..it never made the frame...
- ha ok.
cats gay...on the real ima dim his chin THEN ima thin the win....
only time he pushes "send" with confidence is on M'S'N!!....
- gay
My punches will swell up your jaw, So just be prepared when I drop,
Becuase when a 'Doc Has His Handsfull',..He 'Tells Them To Cough'!!!!
- lol
You don't want it with Frame,...It's obvious you in love with a gay,
Cuz just like 'Queer Clocks',....U'd prolly let '60 men nut' on ya face!!!!
- nah. not a fan of gay jokes.
Quickly I'm Rippin This Faggot, I told you this Kid Wasn't That Sick,
So I'll 'treat his body like the world',......And let it 'Spin On My Axis'!!!!
- ehh .. more of a threat .. s'was ok tho.
You being Sick Is Hardly,...So I'ma take it easy and Rip You Softly,
Cuz me vs You?, I leave 'no doubt behind',..Just like 'Gwen Stefani'!!!!
- heh
All my forces plunge, Punches sore this bum, Of course hes done,
Kids wack, He's 'spent more time on the bench' then 'forrest gump'!!!!!
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lol. you got ripped Doc.. you had that one good line, but the rest were either filler or didnt work out. pretty onesided battle imo ..
v/ Main
